rate_review Reviews

Amazing use of concepts and disjointed points of views and time skips. You are my new favorite author. I love your insight and character analysis. Do you have a Web site? I'd love to get to you, and be able to watch/stalk you so I can keep up on your work. You wield words like a dancer. I'm addicted.

I read this once a long time ago. I don't remember when. But I remembered every single one of those drabbles as I read it yet again today. I don't know what it is about your writing that has such an impact on me. Usually I hate death fics; too often they just seem like clumsy attempts to make people feel something. You make me cry, laugh, smirk, attack my computer screen, and giggle hysterically with only a few sentences. Please keep writing!

Dancin'

It was beautiful. It was a lot of things I can't find the words for right now. It was good. It was...wonderful.

I love it. I love angst and there is just something about drabbles that make it easy to hit the reader hard and fast with the angst. As for Iruka and Kakashi dieing, well, you write what comes to you. That line that inspired everything is a great line. Before I read the note at the bottom it was the line that stuck out the most. Can't wait to read more.

you fucking well broke my heart like five times or somthing and then meded it and now theres nothing left but the impact of al the friggin drama like a hallowe eco of major impression. what I mean to say is: Dang girl your good!

*cries* whaaa! iwakra and kawashi, then stu Sasuwke! pwor Swkia Nawro! WHAAAAAA! *bals like a baby*

Transolation: Iruka, and Kakashi! Then stypid Sasuke! Poor Shika and Naru! *cries like baby*

-sniffle- Man, I'm not suppose to read angest case it makes me sad. But this is good! Sad and made me want to cry some but really good!

~Angel

I... wow. Omg.. I'm sitting here actually crying. I would like to point out that all through my three years on this site, I have never cried at a single fiction that I've ever read. I'm just amazed. You are an exquisite writer, and I am definitely adding you to my list of valuable clicking time. It's incredible.

I've never read a fiction that's twisted my heart so perfectly and made me sit back and just really be shocked and amazed at myself and the writer. I'll be recommending this to everyone who I know that reads the Naruto fictions on this site. You are absolutely incredible.

The inner turmoil of the characters is incredibly well written, and the insight into their reasons of existence is totally original. For a death fiction, I'm just...amazing. I think you've broken my writer's block.

For a parting gift, here's a song that I was reminded of while I read this.

Goodbye Again - Vertical Horizon

I'm on the outside, looking in
What do I see?
So much of this left to begin
Where would I be?
I'm on the outside, looking in
Cover me through this night

Guess I don't know what's, left to say
But hear me out
All of the dreams of, yesterday
Keep breaking me down
What's on the outside, can you say
Or am I getting carried away

It's in your mind
It's in your eyes
So it's goodbye again
It's way past time
For one last try
So it's goodbye again
Goodbye... again

I'm getting on, what's the use
You know how I get
I can't decide which is the truth
At least not yet
I got the feeling, it's you
What can be said, alone in this room
No...

It's in your mind
It's in your eyes
So it's goodbye again
It's way past time
For one last try

Who wants you now?
Maybe somebody else
I'll wait around
Maybe you'll forget you were ever here
Maybe forget you were ever, never here

I'm on the outside, looking down
What do I see?
So much of this cold, in the ground
Where would i be?
On the outside, looking down
Cover me before you go

It's in your mind
It's in your eyes
So it's goodbye again
It's way past time
For one last try
So it's goodbye again

Your falling out,
I'm falling in
So it's goodbye again
It's way past time
For one last try
So it's goodbye... again
So it's goodbye again

Thank you so much for writing this!

damnit. you made me cry. i didn't even make it to the end before i was crying. it was sad. it was poignant. it was beautiful. and it was perfectly written. you did a beautiful job with this story. i loved it. continue to write, you've got an amazing talent.

~hanyou-elf

exquisite~!

pacing, story and snipets make a whole greater than the parts


wow - really

that was just too sad, please never write something like that again.