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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You had me until the end. I like finshed stories and yours left too many open ends. Though I did enjoy the rest of the story.
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG How have I never seen this?? You so need to write a sequel where Naruto is alive or reincarnated or something and he comes back to the damn bastard. Maybe he survived the fire but lost his memories and Sasuke finds him on a mission one day and freaks the hell out. Or you could even make him back to his original type self and make it as though the foxes sacrificed themselves for him and made him whole again. It's an awesome story line, a little heavy on the melodrama but I LOVE it. You so need to try and work it out after all, he promised and Naruto never goes back on his word. Plus I really would love to see what properties the new seal on Sasuke's neck has. I also love the Japanese culture references. Good Job.
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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i dont know if you have gotten any other reviews or not but i think you should contiue this story only PLEASE dont kill naruto off i dont know maybe im a sucker for a happy ending i cant belive its the first fan fic youve written i love it
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was great. personally i think you can continue it, and naruto should be alive otherwise the whole fox thing is moot. keep up the good work and please continue.
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes please do continue as for Naruto being alive I'd say yes =)
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh no no no! naruto is going to be alive!! ALIVE!! but i thought this was really good. though, when referring to sasuke's sharingan, those little 'commas' are tomoe.
i liked it very much, and i hope you do continue it. remember - ALIVE!!
i liked it very much, and i hope you do continue it. remember - ALIVE!!
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great! You should definitely write a sequel! And Naruto should be alive!
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What do you mean - should naruto be alive? Of coarse he should - he can't be dead for 2 reasons - first, it would kill your plot in this story, the whole matter of belive, second - naruto made a promise - and naruto never goes back on his word.
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, the name of the game is this... you be good and write up a sequel... after all, he did promise sasuke... and believing is very very important to naruto...ne? you do it... please??? *blinks*