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person kms
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story. I absolutely loved it!
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while, Nomme! Hi hi, how've you been? ^^ Sorry that I've been gone for some time; I'm just glad to be back.

This was... awesome, as always. I keep trying to form a sentence to comment on this, but I'm speechless. I really, really can't think of anything to say. Well, with the exception of the fact that I loved the part where Iruka said told himself to never let a 20 year old ANBU member sit in his lap. :rofl: That was awesome. Wish I could say something more heartfelt, but because I seem to be going through shock of some sort I'll leave you with my most sincere kudos.
person severedwings
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow..that was great. I knew was going to be, even before I began reading the actual fic. Wanna know why? Because of your damned funny authors note.

get a butt donut and some coffee <---- I was dying. I haven't heard the 'butt doughnut' term in a very long time. Thanks for the funny...and an amazing fic.

Ja!
SW
person Adi
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i forgot to say that i found your fics because you seemed to review all the stories i was reviewing so i thought hey she (im guessing) likes the same fics i do, maybe she writes them too? and yeah i was right! so i'm in the progress of reading your stories!
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is my favorite thing of yours to date. Very well done, very well thought out. Everyone's emotions were very clear to the reader, even the small side characters, which is awesome. I'm feeling very inarticulate at the moment, so I'm afraid that's all I've got, but this was a very good one-shot! Thanks so much for sharing it!

Yay Colts! :D
person Adi
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
brilliant
the writing flowed well
and you own my soul for making it NaruSasu
(smut was particulary good :D)
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wahhhh i loved it!!! i'm so sad that it's over now *sob
person Zrina
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful!! I absolutely loved it! It was easy to picture those two reacting just like that! and the smut was hot too!!
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Simply b-e utifuul, my dear! Heart-breaking, angsty and yet so unbelievably lovely. Through the course of one story you have literally yanked my heart out, stomped it, repaired it, and put it back in... And thats a good thing, btw.
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, i cried so much so many times during this, and each time got worse--now i have a sore throat! ahh but i don't mind, it was very moving. i can't even put into words right now how heartbreaking it was, and yet i loved naruto's plan and especially that it worked. and sasuke's reason for losing it in the first place, and the end was such a payoff for all the heartache beforehand, it was beyond hot. it was intense

and yes, sasuke definitely put a new definition to a shinobi always being "prepared" lol

kyaaa i loved it, thanks *sniffle* gomen.. still had tears during the smex >.>