rate_review Reviews

wow. just, wow. this was amazingly deep, depressingly angsty, heartbreaking and soothing, and then deliciously hot. i loved every word i read. you pulled me in and you wrapped me around your finger and you broke my heart with sasuke's first words. oh how i wanted to cry for naruto. and it was very real with naruto's reactions to it. to everything. very in character regardless of the current situation.

you are an amazing writer and it shows over and over again with every word you put to paper. you pull your reader in and you force them to feel what the characters are feeling. when naruto went to his knees to pray to God, i wanted to fall to my knees with him. i wanted to hold him and reassure him and tell him that it would be okay. when he heard sasuke's words, i wanted to cry with naruto, i wanted to fling myself into iruka-sensei's lap and have him reassure me as well. when his plan worked, i wanted to rejoice loudly, i wanted to cheer and wave victory banners. and when they finally came together, their emotions and feelings expressed with their bodies, i had to fan myself. this was an amazing story and it was well worth giving up any other updates for this beautiful piece of fiction. you outdid yourself. you always grow with everything you write, obviously. it's an amazing job and i loved it!

and btw... fuck yeah. you rock so hard. colts rule! i want them to have a superbowl ring so badly! >.< i need them to win the superbowl! go colts!

*ahem* great job. and i can not wait to read your next endeavor.
~hanyou-elf

*snickers* a shinobi is always prepared...

Awesomely sweet as usual. I liked the tie in of the name, in its strength and lack of specificity (don't think that's a word but whatever). It hurt my heart when Sasuke asked Naruto to kill him, especially with the Koi thrown in. Hell the whole middle section hurt my heart, but all's well that end's well, heh I think I just found a name for a fic I'm working on "Yosh!! Nomme is inspirational!". Thanks, good luck with the superbowl this weekend, I'm guessing it's this weekend. Anyway thanks for this, it made me feel all warm and fuzzy at the end XD.

OK... I'll admit it... This is one hell of a shot!!!!!! At the beggining, I was like weeping, and cursing, and looking at my mother over my shoulder because I was paranoid... and ... and... GAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! *squeals*

I JUST LOVED IT!!!!!! But I must confess that Naruto didn't say Thank you to God... Because well, Naruto being Naruto, would stand on the Hokage Monument, or the roof of the Uchiha Manor, and scream "THANK YOU GOD!!!! THE INSPIRATION WAS USEFULL!!!!!!!" You know, something like that.

Sakura's squeal was lovely, usefull, and very... fangirl like!!!

I love your writing, I love your story... I LOVE YOU!!!! (You better start running, Yaoi fangirls of Doom might want a piece of your mind)

aww it was so pretty! :)

That was just wonderful. I nicely crafted story. I don't know what else to say, that was great.

That was one great big one-shot. Loved it. Well done as always. LOL, your rooting for the colts huh? Well being they are from my home state and their training camp at Rose Hulman is in the closest big town around here I guess I should root with you huh? Go colts!

This was beautiful...my favorite line, “If you go, koi, I go with you. You won’t leave me behind again.” It was so touching and sad, and wonderful at the same time. I'm glad this story had a good ending. You did a wonderful job! I'll be cheering for the Colts with you!

Oh I just loved this. Of course Naruto would come to the rescue! Who else could possibly drag Sasuke out of the slums of his mind? None but the number one hyperactive knucklehead ninja of Konoha! There were a few parts of this that really made me teary eyed but it was so good. I love the longer one-shots and this one was perfect!

Beautiful

That was a sweet fic. Nicely done!