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I am a new mother and I currently should be sleeping while my daughter sleeps. However I couldn't stop reading! I look forward to a update (whispers: I hope it will be soon!) I have never been into mpreg but this...this is just beautiful. Just awesome! Roller coaster of emotions that I couldn't blame on hormones! I smiled, cried and my heart broke so many times for Sasuke. The scene between Naruto and his daughter how she said she knew that voice...Wow, I had to stop and just cry! I loved it!
I must get some sleep now - !!! <3 Again - beautiful! Looking forward to more!

i really like your story and i was afraid that you will not continue it...but you did!!! hope you update again soon!!!:-)

Well, I have to tell you that this particular story is my inspiration. I'd tried my hand at writing Bleach Fanfiction but never really felt my stories. Anyway I'd been reading Naruto fanfiction and came across this story. All of a sudden it became clear. The stark emotion of pain and loss that Sasuke as well as others felt at Naruto's death touched me. I figured out how I wanted to write and the answer was inner turmoil. So, you can say that this story is what helped me find my inner muse. I had thought that it long dropped and despaired but I read your Parent Trap story and thought, those kids sound familiar. So I checked your author page and omg I saw this story and that it had been updated since I read it. So I went back and reread the entire thing. I think my favorite part in the whole thing was 1) when Naruto pranked the rookie 9 and 2)When Sasuke lay crying in his bed. You have done a marvelous job with this story and I really hope to see updates on this one as well as Parent Trap.

Whoa! Oh my gosh...

Well I am sooo excited and nervous, my fingers in jitters are finding it hard to type never mind my brain which I think has turned to mush! I am sooooooooooooooooo utterly GRATEFUL to have read the final chapter here because I honestly think I may have died if at the end of my reading to find Sasuke still in the blank over the situation.

I love it! Heck I could not turn away from my screen even during bathroom breaks I took my laptop with me bwaaaaaaaaah, okay that's just plain insanity but true! :P

The idea is so fresh and handled clumsily in beautiful heartbreaking chunks like only Naruto can ever pull off :) And you have enamoured these kids in my mind brought the easel you painted them on to life and everyone's pain is palpable, it just hurts esp as so far it all has been the pain of agape.

As for Sasuke, you slay me with your characterisation of his stoicism and the reason for his "life" his pain just knocks me right off the block. He suffers the pain of both eros and agape love and heck yes, it just slaughters me!

Okay I think that's all my talking with my heart in my mouth er on my fingers ;) so I better shush as my fangleeinggirlysap is no doubt perpetuating itself lol.

Keeping my fingers tightly crossed you do not neglect this treasure and you update soon.

...sniff sniff sniff!

i love this fics the drama suspence and that little scene with sasuke and girl
naruto you have to update soon please im on the edge of my seat here literally

Took you long enough? Lol jk, it was pretty good, but I'm most eager to find out how this whole mess ends. Finish soon?

This is a fascinating story! I can't wait to see how you plan to wrap things up!

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

AAAAAHHHHH!!!! So much action and finally things happen only to end there DX Oh, you kill me, you kill me!

But it was wonderful! keep up the amazing work!

oh my gods!!!

i am completely in love with this story. u simply must update soon....

*CHIBI Sango gives cookies as bribe*

Crap! Crap! Crap all around! :) Just kidding. Snazzy update, you have here. A little off, compared to the previous chapters, but still readable. What's really weird is that I just finished rereading this fic about a week ago, sulked a bit about it not being updated for a while, then went on. Thanks for updating!