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for Memories of the Future

by BishounenKrazed

schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It's both happy and sad. So bittersweet. Please update soon. PA.
person emp78
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So cute yet bittersweet. Love it. Can't wait.
person littleolmee
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gee that was somewhat of a sad chapter . . . not that I didn't enjoy it though. I think it was a good thing to see some of Sasuke's memories and explain some of his feelings for the story. It really seems Naruto hasn't it in him to be the bitch Kyuubi was to pull off Yuki's old personality. Though I think his whole family really does need him to be more of himself. The kids, as Sasuke remarked, were happier now she had changed but it's just so hard on him. But if Sasuke would just talk about him instead of holding it all in maybe others could help him with his depression at least a bit. What am I saying this is Sasuke we're talking about the only one he'd talk to was Naruto and with him gone . . . well . . . . That last memory of them getting married was sooo funny; I loved it! And I know what it means when the kidlets kick you in the kidney; out of the way potty break, pregnant person coming through, make way people LOL!! Thanks for the update, can't wait to see more from you, take care.
person Zrina
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh man, poor Sasuke :(
Loved the chapter! It was interesting to see things from Sasuke's point of view. I feel so bad for him!!
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the double lemon and seeing Sasuke's pov!! Poor Sasuke needs his dobe!!!
person Allys
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, he really did drop the act cold didn't he XD. *twirls about merrily* Soo happy!! Oh and Thank you so much for the lemon(s) and Sasuke's pov XD. It was so sweet in a sad sort of way, and don't even joke about killing the teme, it's not funny *pouts* Have I mentioned lately how much I love your story lines? Thery're always so different and cool =D Oh well Ja mata
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke. I feel so bad for him. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person Tenkyougan
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Prettyfull fic, I like it very much! Also, Zetsu for Yuki's dad! Long live Zetsu! I laugh at the idea of Zetsu raping Hinata, not because of the act itself, but rather because of how UTTERLY illogical it is.
person Saiou-chan
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's so sad, i feel horrible for Sasuke now. He should know it's Naruto in that body, you must think of a way for him to know.
person suzie
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for more