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for Memories of the Future

by BishounenKrazed

schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! This is a very awesome plot u have here. Anyway, i like Yuki/Naruto standing up t Sasuke in whatever way permits him to. Maybe it'll clue Sasuke in on whats really happening in the long run. Anyway i'd like to get updates on when you update so here's my email : analapana83@aol.com. Update soon!
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So that's what happened? But, will Kyuubi really fix things this time? Hurry with the next chapter!!
person littleolmee
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, I missed so many chapters. . . still have some to read but I needed to get a review out before I forgot some of the points I got in my mind. Loved the Kakashi chapter, I like how you had him be the one to find out. Using his own words to help him see it really was Naruto.*two thumbs up on that scene* The Shikamaru chapter was insightfull into Yuki's life . . . sad that it seems another has suffered the same as Naruto did in his early life but . . . isn't that what the original story has pressed to us? That in the end Naruto isn't different from anyone else, we all have unfair things we have to face. That he isn't different from others or alone in what he has had to face maybe circumstances are different but the pain is the same. . . okay where'd that come from? *scratches head* Man, it's way to early in the morning to be that insightful hee, hee. Just meaning there that you did a great job with that very Naruto-ish. Loved everyone teasing about Kakashi being a date and Kakashi is soo bad to add to it. All the insight we got into what happened to everyone after Naruto's *death* was very moving. Poor Hinata, but you have to applaud her refusel to abort Yuki. Okay I'm off to finish reading. I'll be back to review more. LOL!
person littleolmee
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter 9, maa . . . got to watch that time traveling. It has all those ramafacations when you mess with stuff you know. HMM, is Sakura and Sasuke getting suspesious? I mean surely they have seen Naruto go into one of those trances when talking to Kyuubi before; especially Sasuke since they were married. And Yuki's eyes being blue for a moment . . . does that mean Naruto's soul is becoming a stronger influence in Yuki's body? Well, can't wait till you get another chapter out. Hopefully this time I won't miss so many inbetween reads. Take care!
person Saiou-chan
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH! I WAITED ALL THIS TIME, AND i FINISHED THAT IN LESS THEN 10 MINUETS!
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, Kyuubi sure has been trying his/her best to save all of Naruto's loved ones and him. Now if only Kyuubi could get it totally right, the next time. ;)
person hisachan
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I want to be added to ur updated list plz~
linasakura@yahoo.com
I luv all ur stories...its realli gd!! ^^
plz continue :D
hisachan
ps: i can't wait 4 the next 1.
good luck!
person Damp
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A manicure...A FREAKING MANICURE!! Do you even have a good excuse this time! I thought for a few days that you had a test or onthat you're conputer lost a few files! But you just FEEL like updating? MAN! You authors are the definition of sadistic!! *leaving me hanging for a few sayds, sheesh*
person Allys
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH!! That was so Loopy XD, I'm not confused, but it did take me a minute to get it all straight in my head. It was excellent though, that you put that much thought into it =D! I do love how this is turning out *Grins mischievously* I Love Kakashi - Glomp him for me!! Sticking them together, Genius =D. I also think Sasuke's catching on, at least he knows somethign's up, LOL!! I'm SO HAPPY about this. The blue eyes were also a stroke of genius! Little ways to give him away XD Now you've made my day!! Can't wait for the new update!, in the mean time I'm going to check out the fairy tale, I don't think I've ever seen that before.