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When are you going to update??It has been quite some time now... *she's just inpatiente*

Kyaa! What a wonderful story! I love the idea, and I'm curious to see how the relationship between Naruto/Yuki and Sasuke will progress. It's emotionally provocative and a very good read...so far! I do hope that this won't turn into one of those stories that never finishes! So please, inspire yourself and continue writing! I'm sure a lot of people would thank you for it!

I don't hate you at all, I understand your reason for killing people this is your story not the real manga/anime so you decide what happens to the characters no? I can't wait for the next update and the talk Naruto will have with Kyuubi, I'm really loving this story and each update just makes me read it and enjoy it fully :)

“You died in Sasuke’s arms. Tsunade couldn’t do anything, and she cried. Sasuke cried, as well. His tears trailed silently down his face as he carried you back to the village.”

“Kakashi, this is not a novel.” - I like that line.

Anyway, great update. And it made me a little sad. Poor Hinata. Well at least we got some answers. And everyone thinking Yuki was seeing Kakashi was quite funny. Update soon.

Ya know, and intresting thought hit me, if Itachi is still alive (cause you never said he was dead), I think he should show up, and this where my thought comes in, ^^ his Sharigen, can see that Naruto's soul is in Yuki's body, and he should also know that Kyuubi, was the true owner of the body. Maybe he can spill the beans to Sasuke and his kids? if you want to talk to me about it, email me at slytherin_whitch@yahoo.com

Such a good story! I really like the idea behind it. So...I would LOVE to see it continued! Please update soon! Not too soon, so as to not rush this next chapter, but soon! Pleeeease? I'm really wondering what will happen to Naruto (and Sasuke!) at this point. I'll be waiting for an explanation from Kyuubi - and hopefully, everything will be resolved eventually! I just really hope you have a plan as to how you'll go about writing this entire fic from start to finish, because I would really like for this fic NOT to be one of those that never gets completed!!

So PLEASE update!! I would be ever so grateful! *gives you cookies*

This is going to drive me CRAAAAAZY. D: Why, Kyuubi, why? So much pain for poor Naruto. This is getting so interesting! I'll have you know I check to see if you update almost everyday. So, the two chapters in a row there? That was great. But I was really sad to hear about Hinata. I mean, I understand and all, necessary for the plotline, etc. But still. So sad~ Anyways. Awesome job handling the Kakashi situation. Really liked the whole "look underneath the underneath" quote. Awesome incorporation. But seriously though. I reaaaallly think Sasuke should find out that Naruto's in Yuki's body before Naruto's fixed and all. That would be awesome. I'd love to see his reaction! xD And also, I really like how you're incorporating all the Rookie Nine, etc. a little bit at a time, what with the parents and all. Can't wait till Gaara shows up! Hope he has a kid or two; that would be AWESOME. Also! I was thinking about where the storyline is going and all, and then you introduced the whole "Kyuubi actually killed Naruto" and made it seem on purpose and all. SO. I was thinking, what if Kyuubi did that cause something was going to happen to Naruto that he didn't know about? o.o Getting kinda mysterious here. Now, don't go getting any ideas or anything, but I was thinking on the angst and how its all sad that Naruto didn't get to see his kids grow up or anything, and then I thought about how he died, and was all like "oh GOD what if Naruto was PREGNANT again when he got sliced open?!" I almost made myself cry! D: And believe me, I cry enough when reading this. No more crying! D: (will probably cry until the end anyways) Eh. Sorry, this is really long. xD Well, looking forward to the next update! Hope it's soon~
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The part with a pervy Pakkun was funny! I can't wait till Naruto runs into Gaara. :)

OMG, That's so sad. Poor Hinata, and now I REALLY wanna hug Sasuke. But the chapter had it's funny points too. LIke everyone thinking Yuki was dating Kakashi and LOL, I knew the twins were crushing!! That's so cute but so wrong!!, Makes for great fun though. As for the Akatsuki member, as soon as you said it I thought Hidan, because of the purple eyes, Yuki has purple eyes right? Anyway that was an excellent chapter. I love how this story is going, and I was wondering about that thing with Kyuubi, seems like a vicious cycle :S. Anyway I know you have a plan and I have faith in Nomme-kamisama, LOL.

OH MY FREAKIM' GOODNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HINATA THOUGH? OUR SWEET LIL' KUNOICHI! XD ok im done. damn i did NOT see that coming at all. i mean damn. so yuki's mother was naruto's old crush and best friends. wat a plot twist. and it seems to me kyuubi got a lot of explaining to do. can't wait to read da next chapter XD.