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person Chihaya
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sobs*
So tragic
*sobs*
yet so wonderful!
*sobs*
person celticfx
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what a great update! i'm sad hinata met such a tragic end, but it was an interesting twist to the story. I look forward to your next chapter!
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor Hinata!!! But if Naruto can go back to the past again and be alive, then Hinata should survive right? I want so bad for Sasuke to find out that Naruto is still alive, even if it's in someone else's body. At least then they could talk together before Naruto went back.
person Damp
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You. Killed. Hinata! OMFG!! *dies* *comes back* Are you going to put a little Sasuke POV cuz I think that will be very interesting. I mean, we'll finally get to see how he veiws things...and if you've got an even much better idea...THEN IGNORE MY VOICE! Update soon please ^^! I was rather shocked about the Neji and Ino thing though *dies again* *comes back...again* God Damn it UPDATE SOON!!
person Anon
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What is going on? Hurry with the next chapter!!
person suzie
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon... this is the best story i have read all day...
person mike~
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hinata as the mother? i completely did not see that coming. thx so much for updating, this was such a heart-warming chapter.

i hope naruto asks kakashi why naruto has to escort sasuke back home every night - isn't sasuke a much better fighter? wouldn't yuki in her current state be more of a burden then help if someone were to attack?

i hope naruto's shinning personality will soon help correct all the pain and suffering in the villagers. but its sad to realize that all the respect naruto had finally gathered means nothing and that yuki has to go through all the same griefs.

i look foward to your next update!
person Allys
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome Back!! Yay!! and you updated!! Yay!! I was like Oooh Limey bits, loved it, it's like pulp. Oh and Apples, maybe granny smith XD. Yeah Limey bits and a perverted Pakkun LOL, great way to start a chapter =D. Then that scene at the market, LOL, I can just see a pretty kimono'd girl flipping out and cussing people while threatening violence, LOL. But it sucks that it had to be that way all over again, it's like bad Kyuubi kharma. Oh and Shikamaru to the rescue! That so sems to be his permanent job and SQUEEEE Shika/Tem with babies!!!!! LOL, They are my absolute Favourite, Het couple in Naruto, and the only one I will still voluntarily read. You totally threw me for a loop at the end there, I was like O.O Naruto!!?? But then yeah, hehe, Kyuubi probably would be Queen Bitch. Oh and a Chappie tomorrow, I'm officially doing the happy dance!
person Saiou-chan
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Another update, I was begining to get worried there. Oh no, who else is going to be dead? I'm scared now, But I have a few guesses as to who might also be dead, maybe the otehr two sennin, since they were about the same age as Tsunade.
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yuki is Itachi's daughter, I think... ^__^