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by BishounenKrazed

schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Last two chapters were great!! I'm glad that Naruto has Kakashi to confide in. :)
person Damp
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Who. Else. Is. Dead. *gives you the evil eye*Just because this story isn't very popular doesn't mean that you aren't a very popular author! Your too modest for your own good Nomme. Can't wait for your next update.Hmm...we should have a little Sasuke moment I think. Maybe Sasuke's thoughts on Yuki and Naruto that sort of thing...A POV purely of Sasuke...PWEETY PWEASE WITH YAOI PICUTRE'S ON TOP!
person Saiou-chan
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this, but it's so sad, Sasuke must be in eternal mourning for the loss of his mate, might be why he can't stand hearing his name spoken. Everytime he hears it, he probally wants to break down and cry. Poor Sasuke. Keep up the great work, I'm looking forwerd to an update. ^^
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you did great going with Kakashi and no please don't rewrite the chapter, Kakashi will do his best to help him keep up the appearance while Kyubi figures some way out to turn back time so that Naruto and Sasuke can be together as they should be!

Another great chapter, thanks you again for the email letting me know you updated *huggles*
person Anon
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the way Naruto let Kakaishi know who he really was. At least, now he has someone to talk to and help him out. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person Sandy
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!
Anyway I think he should run into Shikamaru then we can find out who he is married to and he can interact more with Shinsuke. :)

I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great! Finally someone knows whats going on....more or less lol. I think it was went well. Eitherway, if you aren't satisfied with it, you could always tweak it later. Ahhh the power of editing. Kakashi was the pefect person for Naruto to confide in. Anyway, can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon.
person jewel
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well if Sasuke and Naruto had the bond that I think they had, Sasuke is going to get suspicious but he'll tell himself that he's either losing it or imagining it. that would hold true for everyone else. plus Kakashi can't help but act differently. really like the story so far.
person LenaKitsune
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this story to pass the time, not really thinking it would be good. But it slowly drew me in and when i got to the end of what you had written I was so sad that I wanted more. You have a very nice balance of story development and suspense and I can't wait for the next chapter
person Allys
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, no that was a good way for him to find out. Naruto-chan, sun shiny :D LOL, that was so sweet. As for the next chappie, I want him to run into Sasuke some more, hey maybe someone saw the blush through the window and got jealous, it sort of looks like Kei has a little crush, maybe both the twins, God wouldn't that be awkward! Actually Iruka-sensei would be a good choice for who's next. I think Kakashi would want to tell him, but maybe he should ask first. Who knows, I'm sure that whatever you come with, I'll be thrilled to bits. Thank you so much for updating, I know you must be busy what with midterms and all. Oh and if I haven't already said it - Good luck on your exams!