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please let one of the kids find out it would be so funny! after all they maybe able to help him round sasuke.

I think one of the twins should know. I think it would be best!!

kakashi! Besides, he's such a genius he probably knows already anyway, is that what he was talking to Sauske about while Naruto/Yuki was passed out?

I love this story. It is very well written and i love the plot. I think Kakashi should find out cause he was so close to naruto and sasuke and he would keep the secret.

"MAD"DY

Wow, that's a hard choice. I'm going to have to go with Kakashi just because he's an old man and most old men know how to handle wierd situations *such as this on* and also because he's close to Naruto and Sasuke...Sasuke esecially. KAKASHI ALL THE WAY! *Do you plan on Kakashi figuring it out in the next chapter of in one of those later ones?*

well, if you asked me, i think gaara should be in on the act. he is someone who owes his entire 'life' to naruto and based his new personality on him, so he would probably be most likely to pick up on his little slips, being close enough to naruto yet not as blinded by pain as sasuke and the rest of the villagers. great fic and cant wait for more!
-dire

I think it should Kei, he seems to have a fondness for Yuki...and to prevent a wierd incest thingie he should tell him. OR, ayame, she seems the most stable and would be able to handle it better. Not to mention she could tell him anything he needs to know seeing as she lives with Sasuke and is the mirror image of Naruto's sexy jutsu.

Thanks for posting this, i truly enjoyed it!

You make me cry. Every damn time. I ALWAYS CRY WHEN I READ YOUR STORIES. Granted, half the time it's from happiness rather than sadness. This time, it's both. Oh god. I feel so sorry for Naruto. It hurts just thinking about being flung sixteen years into the future, seeing your kids grown and the love of your life still grieving over you and NOT BEING ABLE TO SAY ANYTHING. Well, I was screaming for Naruto throughout these first five chapters. I can't believe how much subtle angst you've managed to pack into these chapters. I love it and hate it at the same time. Wonderful job with the kids. I mean, I've read a lot of Mpreg SasuNaru, but you added a fabulous touch with Ayame wearing orange and Kei/Touya both hating and loving ramen. As for the vote of who learn Naruto's secret, as cliche as it is, I vote Sakura. After all, second to Sasuke, she knows Naruto best. Besides, she's also female to Yuki's female, so she would be able to help Naruto out in "female pinches" so to say. XD Well, enough rambling. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, as with all your stories. Also, know that I truly DEEPLY fell in love with this story, as I'm almost never bothered to write seriously epic proportion reviews. So, consider yourself warned. You might have another paragraph next chapter as well.
Until then~
SSS

AHHH!!! i'm speechless. Naruto's dead. he's in the future, sasuke is hokage *rambles on*. please put my spiraling mind to ease and post the next chapter asap.

this is a great story! is NEji Sasuke lover?