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for Memories of the Future

by BishounenKrazed

person Damp
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so totally can't wait to see Naruto's (Or Yuki-chan's) to seeing his husband! Brings tears to my eyes! Thanks for the explanation. It really helped ^^ My only tough answer is that whole scenerio. The one of who's suffered most. The one who knows what if feels like to have a family and then lose it or the one to have never have had it. That question always left looking like a fish, mouth open but nothing comes out. Anyways, I can't wait for your update. I would so love you if you updated like every other day *gives you the puppy eyes* Pwetty Pwease with Chewwies on top!
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good start to what promises to be a very good fanfiction. a might confusing at times, but i am sure that it will all be explained. I cannot wait for the next chapter! shoo!!!

-dire
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is interesting, i would love to get an email for when you update :D I can't wait to see how this story continues, my addy is digitalkisses@gmail.com

Thanks!
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story as all your fics are. Is is shaping up to something truly good. I would suggest rewriting chapter 1 - the chapter after the prologue. It is a little confusing and the logic is a little circular.
I think what you were trying to say is that when Naruto and Kyubbi died Kyubbi took the body of someone who had just died. She was able to keep the soul that they body belonged to alive as well as Naruto's soul. That's it right?
person Kaishiou
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story. please put me on the mailing list waru.mono.kai@gmail.com =D
person Allys
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap Yes I am, hooked, lined and sunk. You always have the best story lines, they're so screwy, I love them, where do you come up with this shit? Update lady, actually wait, you said you were working on Here's to the Fox O.o. Dammit now I'm confused *thinking... thinking...* Okay Unconfused - The request still stands it's just been ammended - Update!! I don't care what, just update something, Please. (Hmmn... I have to find a legitimate bribe that works... I'll get back to you)
person MORE XD!
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please put me in the mailing list omarigazer@yahoo.com
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. Please continue!!!
person jewel
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really good so far. so is anyone going to figure is out?
person Allys
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is completely rocking my socks, so much so that I have something for you. Sending it to your yahoo address from your author page, from mizrubble22@yahoo.com. It's my bribe.