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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.
I can't wait for more.
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I can't wait for more.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I came across this fic back when there were only four or so chapters, then forgot about it (sort of, a fic this interesting is impossible to completely forget) and re-found it just yesterday. I am in love with it and I eagerly await the next installment.
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, the angst. Will Sasuke ever find out the truth? Please add me to your update list. ankfan25@yahoo.com I woul like to know when you update any stories. I love your fics!
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee you updated, yes!!
What a wonderfully heartbreaking little twist you've put in here! Poor Sasuke must be so tormented right now. I also love the fact that he lowered his shield for Yuki-chan. It shows just how much Naruto's apparent death has affected him. I'm definitely looking forward to see how it all pans out! And I loved the little Gaara insert, it was so sad... but Sasuke's the one for Naruto, of course.
Also, your side-stories were awesome too, but my computer wouldn't let me review them for some reason. >_> The "Dobe" thing was brilliant! And so fitting. ^^ And I was intrigued since your first mention of Shinsuke (since Shikamaru is one of my all-time favourite characters, and of course his offspring are just like him ^^), so I do hope you continue to explore his and Rei's "thing". I think it could be an OC/OC fic that could really work, since you have the background set up already. So there you go. ^^
But yes, wonderful job on this chapter, and as always you leave me aching for more! I haven't reviewed every chapter of this fic (damn computer...) but I have definitely been keeping up, checking every few days for updates, and usually reading the newest chapter the day it it was put up (even this chapter I read when it was posted...but my computer at home owuldn't let me review, so I'm doing it now at a library >_>). ^^ I hope that writing this chapter has re-inspired you to continue this story, and I hope you update soon (hopefully with not as long of a wait as this time around? *hopeful*)!
Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
What a wonderfully heartbreaking little twist you've put in here! Poor Sasuke must be so tormented right now. I also love the fact that he lowered his shield for Yuki-chan. It shows just how much Naruto's apparent death has affected him. I'm definitely looking forward to see how it all pans out! And I loved the little Gaara insert, it was so sad... but Sasuke's the one for Naruto, of course.
Also, your side-stories were awesome too, but my computer wouldn't let me review them for some reason. >_> The "Dobe" thing was brilliant! And so fitting. ^^ And I was intrigued since your first mention of Shinsuke (since Shikamaru is one of my all-time favourite characters, and of course his offspring are just like him ^^), so I do hope you continue to explore his and Rei's "thing". I think it could be an OC/OC fic that could really work, since you have the background set up already. So there you go. ^^
But yes, wonderful job on this chapter, and as always you leave me aching for more! I haven't reviewed every chapter of this fic (damn computer...) but I have definitely been keeping up, checking every few days for updates, and usually reading the newest chapter the day it it was put up (even this chapter I read when it was posted...but my computer at home owuldn't let me review, so I'm doing it now at a library >_>). ^^ I hope that writing this chapter has re-inspired you to continue this story, and I hope you update soon (hopefully with not as long of a wait as this time around? *hopeful*)!
Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! FINALLY! I was begining to think you abandoned this, I was gonna cry! Anyways, nice cahpie, I hope Naruto gets his old body back soon, Sasuke oviously misses him soooooo much. And if you need ideas, I'm more then happy to help you out, I have tons. Email me at slytherin_whitch@yahoo.com if you wanna take me up on it.
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww Hell No!! You are not allowed to take as long and definitely Not allowed to take longer to update!! *Glomps u and showers in kisses and lots of Love!!* Yay!! You and your Awesome self updated! And you dedicated it to me *starry eyes* and you brought me citrus!!!! I loved that they both got carried away! And both felt so bad about it after *Huggles*. Tlittle hint of GaaNaru was nice too XD. And Naruto's almost out what going on! LOL, please update soon *Puppy dog eyes*.
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah i'm hooked....
whoa...so confusing but interesting! How the heck...he had a family!
poor girl; I hope she has a better life :(
still good story...so....deep and long x.x;
whoa...so confusing but interesting! How the heck...he had a family!
poor girl; I hope she has a better life :(
still good story...so....deep and long x.x;
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read the whole thing and it's great!!! More soon please. I can't wait to see what happens next. But I'm just wondering, why doesn't Naruto just go out into the forest? It's not like Gaara and Kakashi wouldn't help him?
Slave
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cannot believe I haven't read this story before! 15 chapters of full glory passing me by! Oh the shame!
I don't really read stories in where Naruto has kids and stuff, and even less so in where Kyuubi's a female. But I just absolutely love this story, the kids (Uchiha's kids) are absolutely perfect, even there names! As for the other pairing that you've got, you've made them sound all so realistic, even NejiIno, which isn't one I've heard about before.
I just want to see how this story will develop further, so please contact me when you update!
young_saiyan
I don't really read stories in where Naruto has kids and stuff, and even less so in where Kyuubi's a female. But I just absolutely love this story, the kids (Uchiha's kids) are absolutely perfect, even there names! As for the other pairing that you've got, you've made them sound all so realistic, even NejiIno, which isn't one I've heard about before.
I just want to see how this story will develop further, so please contact me when you update!
young_saiyan
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha.. if the chapter updates age any further apart the story's title will have a lot more significance for a slightly different reason. >:)
Good chapter. I laugh at the fact that Sasuke's going to spiral into pedo-guilt territory. Naruto is nothing but trouble. ^^
Good chapter. I laugh at the fact that Sasuke's going to spiral into pedo-guilt territory. Naruto is nothing but trouble. ^^