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Jubes should be glad its not possible to bitchslap someone via the internet. coz as non-volent as i usually am that review gave me the urge to and seriously wasn't nice. bordering on flameing. Jubes deary, go spit venom somewhere else. if you don't like the story don't reveiw. I personally think this is an awesome story and it would be a shame to take it down. giving Itachi a reason to for killing his clan humanises him and adds to the story. having said that, the later chapters need the teenyist amount of tweaking to make it flow just that much better. other then that don't change a thing Kaa-san!! *hugs juu*

Well I think your story is ace I hope you don't take it down but it's your choice and I don't want to sound demanding. I can't to find ut if Naruto and the baby are going to be okay.

Please, please, please continue!!!!!!!! This is one of my favorite fic on here, and I wanna read it to the end. MPreg fics are rarely carried out till the end. I don't want this one to follow the same trend when it is so well written. It dosen't matter if the characters are a little OOC... it is called a FANfic after all. It just depends on the FAN that is writing it. So, PLEASE continue!

PS: PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

AAArRRRGGGHHH!! Dont take it down! Ill cry! Please please continue this story!

Hey! its been awhile... I hope you decide to keep this up and keep writing. You'll always have critics, no matter what you do, you cant please everyone. ;) but you do me lol! I happen to think that Itachi loves his brother...well as much as Itachi can love anything, but Sasuke does seem to be the only thing he cares about...So your story idea fits fine with me. However, this is your story, you can make Itachi skip through paddocks of daisies holding Jiriya's hand for god sakes...If people dont wanna read it...they can go take a flying fuck, cos they dont have to! Anyhoo let us know what you're going to do! If you decide to take it off dont just up and leave us!

Whoa... I think that may have been the longest review i've ever written... i may have repeated myself a few times though...

Jubes, no one forced you to read this. If you didn't like it you could have stopped at any time, and read something more to your taste. Thank you Zigana, RebelC, ElementChild, LadyAquill, Mikinyet, Desperately Wanting More, Anon, and Mitsuko. You made me feel a whole lot better. My fit of temper is over now. I'll leave them up. I've only erased three stories since I've been on this site. BTW, the one who taught me English was bilingual, and firmly stressed the importance of correct spelling and grammar, regardless of what language is spoken, because otherwise your words and/or meanings could be misconstrued. Again, thank you all for the mental pick-me-up.

LadyAquill--if you'd like to help me smooth this out some, I'd appreciate it. You can reach me at marine_corps_mama@yahoo.com.

I don't know who's been upsetting you. Ignore them, they are idiots. Please, please update. I would love to know what happens to these characters.

Please continue this story! Is true that Itachi is occ! But I like just like that! He is so sweet! Jubes is only a bitch ignore her she is not worth your attention!