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for My Heart Bleeds for You

by SnowLeopard

schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww this was so fricking sad that Naruto finds out how much soemone cares for him when he's like on the cusp of dying. Tis sad but it's sweet that everything worked out in the end.
person sainaru
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG YOU BITCH THAT MADE ME CRY lol *sniffles* I LOVED THIS STORY THIS MADE ME CRY EVEN MORE CAUSE I LISTENED TO THE SONG WHILE I WATCHED IT , THIS WAS SO SAD IT WOULD HAVE BEEN EVEN SADDER IF NARUTO DIED THOUGH BUT STILL A GREAT STORY *cries some more*
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like you OOC Sasuke much better than the real one. I also think that he might actually feel that way if he ever let himself stop being a bastard, so I won't flame you. It was a good read. ^^ You wrote the emotions in it very well, and seeing as that was your aim I do believe that you succeeded quite well. :D
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! I'm just glad that Naruto didn't die and that Sasuke told him he loved him! Sweet ending. :)
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have some hydro-blasting squirt guns at ready to defend you as well! anyways, cute little fic. i really liked it alot, even if the chars are fairly oc, but hell... your a fanfic writer, not the creator and as such, you have liberties. anyway, 8-10 stars.
-direchan
person dutsada
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very sweet.. but it was kinda short... you think you can make a continuation?? maybe another few chapters?? please? heh heh....Its nice if we can read on how carefull is Sasuke taking care of Naruto all ya know... well think bout it ya!
person sainaru
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
totally loved it sasuke pouring his soul out to naruto so CUTE but thats mostly because i love when naruto is so angsty lol
person Eternel
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good, and sad, I almost started crying, but I'm glad this wasn't a deathfic or else I would have cried so badly.
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aside from hearing Celine Dion's voice in my head the whole time, i liked it very much lol. I did get the concept of it and it was very sweet, in an angsty way, but that kinda angst i dig. I like it. Good job.
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoo-hoo!Awesome!(dances in place and squeals in delight)That absolutly totally and completely ROCKED. I got a little teary eyes and all mushy inside. It was perfect. You sooo deserve something for the excellency of that, hmm...ah here's a SasuNaru plushie, some Pocky, and a dozen cookies(sends you the stuff)I wish I could give you the real thing.