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awwwww!!!!! gorgeous!!!!!pleaase!!! i want a hapy ending....i dont wanna naruto leave sasuke!!!!please!!!!

That was very beautiful. I really liked the change in dynamics for Naruto vs. Sasuke. I also really wish for them to be together, though I can see Naruto leaving. I really think that Sasuke, in his own twisted way, really loves Naruto more than anything. He just royally screwed that up.

I really hope Sasuke fights for Naruto. I know Naruto expects it, but I think Sasuke should fight for Naruto in a different way. Sort of more in his vulnerability, almost begging. Sasuke begging, getting rid of his pride, I think that might help make Naruto see that Sasuke loves him, if he does. Perhaps have Sasuke do such relaxing things to Naruto? No matter what happens, this is quite an intriguing story. Can't wait for the next update! :-) ~ Jelp

This chapter was incredibly sweet, although all together sad. Its good to see Sasuke in such a state of vulnerability. The two of them have been through too much and at least deserve that one night of togetherness, trust, bonding and closure that Naruto is offering. I'm glad that you are not rushing this. It makes for a much better read and adds a lot more dimensions to the characters. Keep up the good work!

Um...if you're looking for bittersweet, you've pulled it off fantastically. I just stumbled on this story today and I am blown away by the depth that you have brought out in the characters and the situations. I can see how you could really end their romantic relationship with Naruto's farewell, and yes, that would be sad, but very real. And yet, there still seems to be room to heal what is between them.

In my opinion, this is a wonderfully done story; definately dark; there is an underlying realism that is almost scary. Dark isn't usually my thing, and I honestly don't see this as one of the fics that I re-read (too much angst) I am really interested in how you finish this story so definately looking forward to updates.

I can see it already this story is going to have a sad ending. NO! WHY?! Oh well i am glad you finally had some time to update. I loved this chapter, Naruto is so wonderful, and so is sasuke in his own way. I still hope for a happy ending, ah. They are beautiful. I agree Sasuke needs more then sex, as it is so easy for him to get it from anyone. This has to be something special.

I'm glad my reviews made your night because you updating made mine :-) Even though I should have been doing my college stuff. I think Shino/Kankuro pairing would be amazing!!! I really like Shino and he is totally underestimated powerwise and his hotness level. I hope Naruto ending things doesn't turn into a huge catastrophe, but then there wouldn't be much drama if it didn't lol. Your talent is really limitless, and I can't wait to see how everything will unfold. Now I really am a fangirl ^_^

Bittersweet, eh? More like downright depressing. What about a happy ending, eh??? *pouts* So not fair. I hate the way angst makes me feel all sad, but at the same time I just can't resist the beautiful flow of your writing and the unique point of view into Naruto's character. *sighs sadly* If only there was a happy ending that I could look forward to, but alas, I doubt it will be so... :(

I just love how deep this is... sigh... They switch roles and sometimes it seems like they were in that role in the beginning... I love this story!!! XD

Welcome Back! I think this chapter is sooooo romantic and sweet, even if it is in a bitter way. and I'll be sad to see them part company.

I think the approach you took with this chapter was perfect. It was very poignant. Of course Naruto's special night with Sasuke would be more than just sex. I am just so glad you updated...I almost had a coronary when I saw this ^_^ Loved this chapter, will probably read it repeatedly until you update again~ that probably makes me a fangirl in the best sense of that word :-)