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for Breaking Apart

by cloudydayz

schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh god i love this story! Now that Sasuke realizes how he feels for Naruto, Naruto plans on leaving him...ah so good and fucked up. You know i am still rooting for a happy ending. Preceded by a whole lot of messed up depressing stuff.
Hope you really do have more time to update. I can’t wait to see what will happen next
person via
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amazing story and creative cant wait for the next chp.
person Kalariona (Just cant be bothered to log in!)
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In all honesty, I was slightly warey of reading this fic. I dont really like dark fics with practically unfeeling characters, but I decided to give this one a chance. I'm actually glad I did. Sasuke is slightly overboard but I do like the way you have wrote him since I love reading obsessed Sasuke stories. I was worrying about how weak you had begun to write Naruto, but after getting this far, I see that he isn't. I like.

Please update when you can. I'll be on the lookout.

Rie
xx
person Gwyllion
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH!! Thank you thank YOU for the lovely update!! I as hoping that Naruto wouldn't forgive Sasuke that easily though....but I was glad about this talk from Sasuke. At least he told the truth and expressed his anger and care for naruto in how he killed off Orochimaru. I can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks again and please keep up the wonderful work!
person Bk
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I loved that chapter! The ending where Sasuke realizes he really loves Naruto was the freaking best. >< I absolutely love the scene where they're both laughing. It was so cute! I feel like drawing it omfg. *_* I hope you won't mind if I did? xD Gahhh Naruto is gonna hurt poor Sasuke. I hope they have a happy ending. D:<
person hisoka
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SO HE FINALLY FINDS HE LOVES HIM,TOO BAD THEY WONT BE TOGETHER FOR TOO LONG IF NARUTOS PLAN GOES WELL. BUT THEN AGAIN LIKE NARUTO SAID SASUKE WONT LET HIM GO THAT EASILY.HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON THEIR PLANS FOR EACH OTHER ARE CRAZY BUT SO ARE THEY ONE MAD AND ONE TOTALLY INSANE.
person SasuNaru723
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP!! I knew an update was coming out this week! How freaky is that?! In my head I kept on saying 'Today has got to be the day. I just can SENSE it for godsakes!' And what do you know? I was right on the money! By the way, even though this chapter wasn't the lemon I thought it was going to be yet, I'm glad Naruto is finally getting to know the true story of what happened while he was capture by Sound. As well as Sasuke in return realizing Naruto the whole time believed Sasuke to have wanted Naruto broken by Sound. It’s kind of sad that Sasuke believes he's finally going to get that feeling of being loved again like he once had in his childhood from his parent (mostly his mom) before Itachi murderalized them all. And updates will come a lot soon??!! That’s awesome!! I’m stuck to this sexy/dark story like superglue! In the mean time, have fun with it (the story of course)! ^_^

person Anon
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was so cool checking for new stories and seeing this one updated so soon, i'm elated about your newly freed schedule ^_^ I really liked the sense of madness that you put in both naruto and sasuke and how each recognized the other to be slightly nuts. I think a little bit of insanity must be like a prerequisite for shinobi. I'm looking forward to finding out what will happen and change once naruto carries out the plan of his.
person Aice
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is a relief. At least they start to understand each other.
Thanks for the story.
person animelover
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I just finished chapter 1, and all i can say is sasuke and shino have to DIE!!!!! Poor naruto. ok, I just can't write anymore ... gotta finish reading. LOL!

Later!