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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:fans herself: we get a lemon. thank god. this was so hot i'm melting
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YESSSSSS!!!! Naruto is back and ready to kick some a*@!!!!!! Ok, now we know who the real Naruto is, let the games begin!! please tell me he's going to fight back, PUHLEEASE!
I absolutely love how you make psycho so fascinating to read ... how we watch Naruto reawaken and remember who he is. Gotta run ... wanna read a couple more chappies before bed. It's so fun when you get to read a bunch of them all at watch without having to wait for updates *evil laugh*. Yeah, I'm cheating and proud of it.
See ya!
I absolutely love how you make psycho so fascinating to read ... how we watch Naruto reawaken and remember who he is. Gotta run ... wanna read a couple more chappies before bed. It's so fun when you get to read a bunch of them all at watch without having to wait for updates *evil laugh*. Yeah, I'm cheating and proud of it.
See ya!
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! ok, i know i just reviewed but finished reading the remaining chaps. geez, this puppy is addictive. n e way, i think in my last review i wanted sasuke to get his butt kicked, now i want them to really kiss and make up. but i'm dying to know what gaara is up to ... will there be a hint of gaara/naru? i wouldn't mind. oh, and where did you get the clansman ritual stuff? if you made that up, you are a fipping genius and need to be making some serious money off this stuff. LOL! that was really interesting how sasuke and neji did the ritual conversation and s got a clue. well done!
i know you just updated but can't want for the next installment .. oh, will there be any waff or fluff in this fic? any more lemons? later!
i know you just updated but can't want for the next installment .. oh, will there be any waff or fluff in this fic? any more lemons? later!
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Your discription in every chapter leaves me wanting more. I love how you portray every character. Words cannot express how much I cherish this story and want you to update.
Please update again soon,
~ rAiNwAtEr ~
Please update again soon,
~ rAiNwAtEr ~
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oohhhhh you have the most deliciously demented mind ever, these themes are quite disturbing but i've become addicted to your story line, i doubt i could ever imagine this sort of thing on my own, so i am very thankful that you can do it instead lol, i hope you get lots of inspiration and can create another chapter as soon as possible, impatient person i may be but i will definately wait as long as it takes to read where u take this story :) i really do hope that naruto in some way will get some revenge for sasuke's many betrayals (i guess you could call them)
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::rubs hands together eagerly:: Oooooo. I wanna see a more "in control" Naruto. Sasuke needs to be punished for his infedelity. He can't be allowed to do that anymore. Good update! ~ Jelp
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad they had their talk!! But they needed to talk more since Naruto still wants revenge. But then, Sasuke did sleep with half the village of Konoha. XD
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is so twisted!! O_o I LOVE IT! Sasuke is just obsessed. Reminds me of a manga (Yaoi) I just read. Guys falls in love with a window cleaner, kidnaps him, captures him and rapes him for a week. Rapee falls in love with rapist. Only in manga. Personally I reckon its stockholm syndrome the whole way but well. Art was pretty. Um yeah. Lol Shino's rather interesting. Personally I hope he doesn't die. Cuz he's got mad bug skillz. But yeah. All powerful obsession psycho Sasuke is so fun to read. Angsty timid broken "broken" Naruto. Dang. Love it! More!!
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
To hear Naruto isn't as helpless as he seems is quite encouraging. Sasuke obsessed and crazed as he is still isn't too psycho that he is naught but a total depraved freak. Sadistic with redeeming qualities. ^^;; That was a hot lemon. Man can't wait to read more! Pretty sure this is Sasunaru the whole way but if it ever does swap.. you've got my vote. More!!
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whole this chapter was a turnaround! O_O Haha Sasunau almost seemed... Normal. Naruto freaking out about heard by the neighbours. Sasuke giving Naruto a massage and removing bondages and what not. It was kinda nice that this fic isn't entirely dark. As in dank and dark. Instead it's just really hot and dark ^_~ Coming from reading DSNaruto I am loving the Dom Sasu thing you've got going. Naruto as uke is just so right. Although what with being elite ninja and anbu and all... They are certainly free aye? No missions no summons no more Hokage dreams I take it? Ah well, its not that sort of fic anyway. Glad to see more of Naruto's POV. And that he's more then a doll. Sasuke seems more in love and obsessed then anything. Which is just a total turn on really! XDXDXD More!!