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OMG! Naruto! Whoa.. didn't see that coming! (and typo from last review, I meant whoa not 'whole' sometimes i type without thinking) Okay this may just be a case of me reading too fast but I was under the impression Sasuke didn't "know" about Naruto for at least three weeks. He did save him straight away. Naruto however doesn't know that. And I'm loving Naruto's actual personality. Oh the angst! It's absolutely glorious! Haha to talk about missions and well it happens. Gawds I'm totally loving this fic! Can't wait to see more of Naruto's real self. As a reader I'm fairly... absolutely horrible at guessing.. which is why I don't, things happen and I take it as it is. Shock, Horrror etc. Where this fic is going.. not even beginning to speculate but just can't stop reading! More!!!!

Yes! Power struggle!! Uke in control? Even better! Shikamaru's reasoning and overall skills is just too mad. I meant his deduction and thinking skills. You wrote him very well I reckon. Not Neji huh? That's a surprise. Everyone else... Haha Poor Naruto.. Sasuke's such a slut. But a slut in love so that's okay. I really like how everyone keeps telling Naruto he's different. Til he realises in what way exactly he's different.. Oh i can't wait! Lovely chapter! Naruto is (and will most likely always will be) my favourite character and it's always nice to see more of his head! More more more!!!

However said this wasn't angsty is a total moron. Nuff said.

Man that stuff about clan rites.. That was really... Eloquent. Wonderfully expressed and complex yet intricate and really quite cool. Argh. That so doesn't do it justice. But seriously. Damn cool. Like the whole black market jutsu thing. But clans rites. Seiously cool. And Sasuke's found a bond! Yay! War?? Nooooo... This is not that dark at all. The earlier chapters were seriously freaking hot but right now it's just really really really really good. So wanna keep reading and finding out more (and hoping there's more to read) Lemons too of course. But all the character interaction and happenings. More then a dark PWP. Wonderful fic!! Stupid AFF.net not letting me review more then once in a day. When the heck did that happen? It's per chapter stupid website! Sheesh. So to not risk me losing all this err. Sorry but I'm just gonna start one massively long review and err add to it as I read along. Personally I reckon that'd be more annoying then lil drabbles cuz it's just one annoying chuck of text (and raving/squealing etc) So err. Shall attempt to format somewhat..

OMG!!! And it totally heats up!!
Damn Naruto's inside knowledge totally threw me there!
God I love the way you write Ninja rituals! Reporting is different for different statuses.. That's just so cool... Ahhh I know you already have a fangirl (a couple really I'm sure) but I've definitely joined their ranks "waves banner in arms" And this whole mixed signals thing between Naruto and Sasuke.. It has me all upset and happy at the same time! Silly boys.. they think they know each other so well..
Am a bit upset at the nonchalance everyone seems to have at Sand's total annihilation. Sheesh that is a lot of people you know. And Naruto! *whaps* Rokudaime indeed with that attitude!
Gaara/Ino? Lol i think i prefer Temari/Ino Gaara's always been Naruto's boy!
I love love love Naruto getting a backbone however! Hehe hot lemon on the way yes??

OMG... Just realised that was the end. No way! OMG please please please!!! More! Update! Soon! Frequently! Daily! More More!!! Please??? *offers plushies in compromising positions* If it inspires right?? More!!!

O_O YOU LEAVE ME THERE?! Please update again soon! PLEASE!

I'm enjoy the darkness of this thus far, and though I'm only on chapter 3, I just had to review to tell you that I'm really loving this intensity and foreboding feeling.

I do have a complaint though. Since you're doing everything in first person narrative, you really don't need to put the narrator's thoughts in single quotation marks, all that does is making it hard for readers to differentiate between double and single quotation marks since you put in thoughts so often.

i know this fic is agnsty and dark, but you somehow have a way of turning it from the dark to something really sorta uplifting. Usually when i read stories like this i end up in sort of a depressed bad mood, however i tend to finish these chapters on a good note, in anticipation for naruto to regain control of the situation and over sasuske. i hope you don't ever stop writing this story, because i'm really on the edge of my computer chair waiting to see what sasukes reaction will be and what will happen when he meets up with gaara again.

Ah, I love the political intrigue, as well as the depth you exuded to describe the hunter nin. Beautiful plot line. This is one of my top five favorite stories, a place a reserve for pieces with originality, flawless characterization, perfect language, and intricate plots. Such a pleasure to read.

I love this story, but is there any hope for a happy ending for poor naruto and sasuke?!?!

I am deeply impressed with the dark nature of this story but I am truly pleased that Naruto is finally aware again and is fully capable of paying Ichiha back for all the whoring around he did, make Uchiha pay !. I just don't think making Naruto do payback by having sex with someone is really a good way of paying that bastard back but showing Sasuke that Naruto is strong without him and is capable of standing on his two feet and he still carries that fire to be strong to be hokage to be capable of caring for others that would totally show that bastard that Naruto is Naruto and that he should respect him and not treat him like a possesion or a child anymore but as an equal. Naruto kick that bastards asss! Show him your the stronger person that he is!
Naruto just needs to tell him he broke because of Sasuke not showing up like he was suppose to.

Really awasome fic now that naruto isn't so ill and is finally aware that he is strong and that its time to make that Uchiha pay for keeping him week.

Yeah...it's startin' to get really, really good now. Don't slow down on the upates (please)