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Oh WONDERFUL!!! I'm so glad to see you're updating again! I had almost given up hope on this amazing fic. The angst you write is very deep and painful. I can really feel Naruto's suffering and I just want him to finally break it off with Sasuke. Just torment that bastard even more...lol. Can't wait to read more from you. Thanks again for the continuation! :)

Soo happy you've updated! I have you on FFNet as a favorite! =] The tension from now on, is going to be incredible! (lol) Please try to updated more and really can't wait for more chappies! =]] Good luck! xoxo

i'm so glad that you will continue to update here on aff.net

i read this story last year and was going to post a search for it but i could not remember many details only the knowledge that it was sasunaru, and that naruto was a hunter nin.

i really have enjoyed the back and forth between the two, the misunderstandings between both of them are so heart breaking. i hope that you will not turn this into a sasuneji fic. it feels like that is where you might be going with it, but my hope is that you stick with what neji thinks, that naruto and sasuke are inevitable.

thank you for the update and i can't wait to read more.

Ahh please continue posting on aff! Sorry that I haven't review every chapter I read (I rate them tho!) but I do thoroughly enjoy this story. Also I noticed that some of the heavier stuff i.e. BDSM chapters wasn't posted on ffnet, sooo where will you post the more mature content chapters if not here at aff? I love this story, you add much depth to your characters (something that's lacking in many other fanfics). Cannot wait for the next part!

oo come on! i just finished the last chapter and at a time when I am supposed to learn for my biochemistry exam... which is in 2 days! It was so fucking interestin i don't know why there aren't many views! Probably because of the long chapters... But never mind, this is like the best serious fanfiction I've read in sooo long! I couldn;t stop reading after chap 4, seriously it was that good! How do you come up with such ideas? And so much psichological stuff... honestly it drives me up the wall, it's so marvouless! If you're gonna post it on ff can you pleeeease pleeease leave a ling as a last chapter or smt? I just gotta read the next part but I rarely go to ff.... It's too bad about the smut really, i loved the rimming part and all that... but if you still don't want to post it here, please at least write me a mail or smt to at least know how the name of the part is!
One more thing - you wrote in one of the chapters that all Hokages have to have been hunter nins - how did tsunade end up being Hokage - or was that only because of need and there was no one better? Cuz I somehow don't see her as a hunter nin.

Cloudy! I was so excited to see updates to this fic and just gorged myself on the last few chapters I'd missed. They were gorgeous and delicious and just, ugh, they're both so broken and lonely and I just can't wait to see what you have in store for them.

I'm sad you're going over to FF only! I do hope you consider double posting. Maybe AFF doesn't have the volume of other places, but the interest is genuine. Not to mention, you don't have to censor yourself here. And goodness, I do hope you don't censor yourself too much. You write beautifully and your love scenes are just so powerful. It would b sad to lose that.

But anyways! The point of this review was to tell you how awesome you are for keeping up on this, even if life has gotten in the way at times, and writing such a wonderfully captivating fic that just sucks you into their world. I am so very excited for the next part <3

Argh! I love this story, and im not on ff.net! does that mean there arent going to be anymore...'good' bits of the story?

Oh please please please continue to post on AFF! You miss out on all the best scenes anywhere else! I usually use the internet on my phone, (sitting over in the corner snickering to myself reading stories;D) But it also means that it wont let me rate and review! I came to the internet cafe just to let you know that the people on here LOVE your story too! I love your character development and i cant wait to see what happens next, please keep the good stuff coming!! ;)

My God, Sasuke is unraveling fast, he's kind of scaring me alittle. And poor Neji is seemingly caught in the middle of it all.

I refuse to be the only one feeling the burn of our failed love.
I would dare to hold him together with my air, like he put me back together with his fire.

These are two of my favorite lines from this chapter. All different aspects from previous chapters are being woven back in and further flushed out as the story progresses. Is Shino going to be reappearing anytime soon? Anyways excellent work!