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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Sasuke is now becoming saner and is questioning his behavior and feelings for Naruto. This story is really intense!
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sasukes even crazier than i thought.
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
/squeals/ Oh - I'm so happy to have read this new chapter!! That whole rules with clansmen and everything was very interesting and I'm actually happy that Sasuke now feels as though he has family again and a sense of a clan. However, even though Sasuke's in good spirits now that Neji is one of his clansmen and Sasuke's realized his errors with how he's been treating Naruto, Naruto may not be as thrilled of Sasuke's return like he is expecting. I look forward to your next chapter!! ^_^
Oh -and by the way - I really like how you've wrote Neji in here. It really does fit his character and so far he's one of my favorites in this story.
Oh -and by the way - I really like how you've wrote Neji in here. It really does fit his character and so far he's one of my favorites in this story.
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please please PLEASE *down on my knees begging* update soon!!! I've read this story over and over again! It's so good! I'm going out of my mind waiting like this!!! What will happen between naruto and gaara? will sasuke kill gaara like the beginning of chapter 2 suggests? I hope naruto will get stronger and beat the cr*p out of sasuke... but i also hope they will end up together too! See? I'm all confused now thanx to your story!! PLEEEEEAAAAAAAAASE UPDATE NOOOW!!
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Neji getting some sense into Sasuke! And I'm glad Shikamaru talked with Naruto earlier. Hmmm...Naruto should be the one to punish Sasuke for his crimes, ne? :-D Keep up the good work! Excellent chapter as usual. Just one request, don't have Sasuke "cheat" on Naruto any more? They did finally sleep together after all. ~ Jelp
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely loved this chapter the most by far.
the entire clan language completely blew my mind away - to think that sasuke and neji's conversations hold such deep symbolism sends shivers down my spine - the depth of their newly formed bond was intricate and intimate.
the silent language between shika and naruto was written just as well >.
i really loved all the thought you put into the conversations between all the characters. i would have never thought that ino was the traitor = but then i was only mildy surprised, the hint that you gave about ino never being with sasuke before kinda placated my shock at the info.
even though sasuke's starting to warm up to neiji - im kinda disturbed at how fickle sasuke really is - or how confused he is about his own feelings towards naruto. does that mean that he doesn't really love naruto in the way he originally thought? although i love the new clans-men bond he has with neji, i fear that that kinship is actually stronger than the relationship he has with naruto. in the years it took for sasuke to "heal" naruto, the entire time, sasuke wasn't being true to himself - meaning the entire time was a fake representation of his feelings for naruto - does that mean he doesn't truly care for naruto, but just wants something, some "toy" to bypass his own loneliness due to the lack of a clan? ... hum, i think im starting to ramble now XD i guess sasuke's confusion is rubbing off on me.
thanks for all the hard work - the first couple of chapters, sasuke was truly scary, morbid, and creepy - but i hope with the new found revelations (and naruto's self-awakening), that the sasunaru "true" relationship can finally start.
great work, update soon!
the entire clan language completely blew my mind away - to think that sasuke and neji's conversations hold such deep symbolism sends shivers down my spine - the depth of their newly formed bond was intricate and intimate.
the silent language between shika and naruto was written just as well >.
i really loved all the thought you put into the conversations between all the characters. i would have never thought that ino was the traitor = but then i was only mildy surprised, the hint that you gave about ino never being with sasuke before kinda placated my shock at the info.
even though sasuke's starting to warm up to neiji - im kinda disturbed at how fickle sasuke really is - or how confused he is about his own feelings towards naruto. does that mean that he doesn't really love naruto in the way he originally thought? although i love the new clans-men bond he has with neji, i fear that that kinship is actually stronger than the relationship he has with naruto. in the years it took for sasuke to "heal" naruto, the entire time, sasuke wasn't being true to himself - meaning the entire time was a fake representation of his feelings for naruto - does that mean he doesn't truly care for naruto, but just wants something, some "toy" to bypass his own loneliness due to the lack of a clan? ... hum, i think im starting to ramble now XD i guess sasuke's confusion is rubbing off on me.
thanks for all the hard work - the first couple of chapters, sasuke was truly scary, morbid, and creepy - but i hope with the new found revelations (and naruto's self-awakening), that the sasunaru "true" relationship can finally start.
great work, update soon!
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe. I loved it. :screams: Warmonger!
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I lovee your story!
The angst <33 the drama <33 AND Gaara <33
~ Keep up the writing!
The angst <33 the drama <33 AND Gaara <33
~ Keep up the writing!
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
possesive horny people are a problem
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please add mpreg!!