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for Breaking Apart

by cloudydayz

person Gwyllion
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an absolutely fantastic job you have done here!! I'm so glad that Naruto is is slowly trying to break out of his shell too. Sasuke deserves to be punished by his actions....can't wait to find out in future posts...keep it up! :D
person kai
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hadnt read this before but then i decided 'what the hell' and read it, i half ta say sasuke is even more possessive than i thought he could be.to screw that many people and keep them close to the one you love is kinda heart breaking and smart but heart breaking in the least.please continue i want to know how sasuke reacts to the real naruto and if naruto will get to see gaara at all or not, and if he stays with gaara or not.update please
person SecretWorlds
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better. I love your writing, it is simply fantastic. I know i may be the only one saying this but... i kinda want naruto to end up with sasuke. I mean Sasuke really loves him!!! Its not his fault he doesn't know hw to love. I know, i'm taking sasuke's side and thats weird but... lol. Actually this story is sooo good i cant even really pick a side because they both such believable and pitiful characters. please update because i guarantee I'll read it and love it right away. bye bye ^-^
person hinata_chan
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you for this great story! i really love it! I've already read it twice and I think i will read it again and again *serious case of insomnia - it's all your fault!lol*. I can't get enough of sasuke's possessiveness over naruto, and I can't wait to see naruto piecing himself back together in the good order this time. Will he make sasuke suffer? I hope so! Sasuke needs to learn to respect him more even if it breaks him apart, besides, maybe that's what he really needs to mend his own broken soul. Naruto doesn't seem to believe sasuke can love, after all he really has been cheating on him since they came back (no matter what shike said). I wonder were he stands now concerning his feelings for sasuke. I wish you will make naruto stronger, strong enough to (beat the crap out of... hmm!) make sasuke understand he can't manipulate those he cares for. I can't wait to see what will happen with gaara, the kazekage must be worried about his friend and he seems to suspect sasuke has something to do with it. I don't know if this drabble really makes sense to you but all in all, I LOVE THIS STORY!!! PLEASE update soon!!!!
person basilika
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.. mesmerizing. i've read tonns of fan fiction i my life, and this is one of the rare times when a story is so unique and captivating that it completely sucks you in and takes over your mind. heh. and i find myself incredibly influenced by the atmosphere of it. what, actually, is quite scary, 'cause i've become waaay more depressed and seeking solitude. on the other hand, the fact that this story affects me so much is just another credit to your writting skills.
person ela116
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
youve got to continue. I've never read a story this...morbid before.Morbid is the only word I can think of @ the moment.I'm starting to think Sasuke really does love him.Well does he? anyway update as soon as you can. Im dying for the last chapter.


-ela
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am in love with this story...so glad it's not a harem fic...i can see them wanting someone like naruto but not naruto you know what i mean...
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this new development
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am truly madly inlove with your story. Call me a sick puppy but i can understand sasuke's evil twisted logic...and kind of sympathise with him /it's kind of making me see myself in a diffrent light. i still feel sorry for naruto..if i found out he had been cheating on me that long i would pull a sasuke. tie him up and whip him, only without the happy ending.
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love the twist with Gaara. This definately bends the story into a whole new direction. Will it interfere with Naruto's sudden realization that he holds all the card in the relationship and his new desire to make Sasuke pay? Will Gaara's demands threaten the bond between him and Naruto? I can't wait to see Sasuke flip when he returns to discovered the sudden change in the attitude Naruto takes in their relationship. Everyone always underestimates Naruto and Sasuke's in for a rude and shocking realization.

I love this story and look forward to your next installation. :)