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for Breaking Apart

by cloudydayz

person SasuNaru723
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so amazed that I was right about this new chapter of yours! That's so funny! Anyhoo, I think this Gaara you've describe fits his character vey well, plus now Sasuke see's that he truly does have a rival worth stressing and freaking out over in fear of having Naruto taken from him. Now I'm very curious to see what actions Naruto will take once he finds out about Gaara's demand. Great job so far with the plot of this story!! ^0^
person dana
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like whatyou said in the an anbout lovely like a dead rose. when i read i thought that was one of the profound things i had evre read. i love horror and when i thought about it that description was perfect. i love this chapter by the way i totally see how sasuke and gaara would be the same. i love this story so much and can't wait til the next update.
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
S*** things don't seem to be getting better - it's a really sticky situation they've gotten themselves in and if Neji hadn't been there then things probably would've gotten worse *sigh*

Anyway, you're making me more anxous for what's to come!!! looool this is one of the best angst fics i've ever read - seriously it is and i can't wait for more. Thanks so much for the update!!!

Hina xXxx
person Jelp
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh! Sasuke finally snapped. I almost hope that Naruto fools around with Gaara, just to piss of Sasuke - but not at the same time because I don't want Naruto to sink to Sasuke's level. Keep up the good work! ~ Jelp
person Vex
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, You have Gaara! And the real one, not some emo ukeish guy.
Squee! I think I just fangirled. >w<
person Vien
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't know why >< but after I read this chapter, I pitty Sasuke really much. An yeah, he is so lost in it, damn. But I think in some twist of way I like him more now, and I don't want Naruto to leave him for Gaara. Sasuke is 'lil insane (as we see Naruto too) but I hope he will also show his other face, that he has something more to shock Naruto too after all, I don't like the idea of Naruto take all the control... maybe it's bc I always like dominant Sasuke more? Naruto is to much full of himself for me, just like Sasuke was before - and this is bad, really bad, when you think that everythinkg is going to be like you want -it doesn't have to- and you have all control - you can lose it fast.

Eh I'm confused. Hope you'll upload soon ;*

(sorry if you didn't understand somethinkg that I mean - my english is still bad... :( )
person Sancta
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Gaara in this chapter, he's so devious. Can't wait for more.
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bout time Naruto realized his own prowess! I love the interaction between Shika and Naru. Great dynamics and fabulous dialog. I'll await more with perfect patience!
person Sendrine
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story, especially the deranged and sadistic Sasuke muhahaha. Naruto is equally captivating. Keep up the good work >_<
person SasuNaru723
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oi, me here. If you're having a trouble with continuing the plot, maybe you can have Gaara come in to protect Naruto from Sasuke. Not as in to make it a gaanaru pairing, but I would think after all the times Naruto's saved Gaara, that Gaara owes Naruto protection at least. Plus, since Naruto could be the future hokage, a kage should protect a future kage's well being. Don't you think? I don't know... just and little inspiration if you're having trouble with the next chapter! I'm so excited to see what will happen in the next chapter!!