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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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this is so great, its the perfect twist to keep this story interesting. omg I can hardly wait to see what Naruto does next!
this is so great, its the perfect twist to keep this story interesting. omg I can hardly wait to see what Naruto does next!
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the dark aspect of this story. A very good dark Sasuske and a strong Naruto appearing within the cracks. Awsome! I wonder how Sasuke will react to this harder Naruto neh? deep down inside......*I think he'll like it* Keep up the good work.
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jelp reviewing again. You haven't updated in over a month, and I hope everything is okay. Good luck with whatever is slowing you from updating. :'( Just saying hi in case you needed encouragement, ne? ~ Jelp
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is orety mucg the best fanfiction ive ever read, i absolutely love it! I love how you get into both their heads. Please update soon!! It would men so much to a sad little avid reader like me! lol See ya
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Huzza! Great twist. Very believable characterization, as I've come to expect from you. I can see Naruto sacrificing for Sasuke, and Sasuke seeking control over what he has always wanted. (Sasuke is always trying to control the world around him and his destiny, and always failing miserably.) You have captured many facets of Naruto's personality - as a person, a friend, a lover, a ninja. Congratulations! This is such an enjoyable story. I so love reading.
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Way to go Naruto! This fic is a huge twist in what I usual would read, but I got addicted after the first few chapters. I'm still hoping that Sasuke would change for the better and that he would finally come to accept and love Naruto the way he is. Can't wait till the next chappie. Keep up the wonderful work! :)
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I think Naruto has just had a couple of epiphanies...(sp?)... Anywho this story is very exciting to read and i can't wait till you update aagin.
I wanna see what Naruto is going to do when Sasuke comes back and if Naruto will listen to Sasukes explination. They seriously need to have a talk to straighten out all their problems.
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
I wanna see what Naruto is going to do when Sasuke comes back and if Naruto will listen to Sasukes explination. They seriously need to have a talk to straighten out all their problems.
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mha! I agree...fuck sasuke!...on the bed...of the sofa...kitchen table...hallway wall....shower wall...wait...off topic! At any rate this was good, I kind of got the chills like the real Naruto just woke up from a coma or something was pissed to find out what was really going on. Puzzles must have not been the Uchiha's thing as a child ...I mean if you can't but the piece back they way they should go...then you shouldn't play with them at all! Hah...I hope the next chapter is an insight on Sasuke.
Thanks for the support!
Thanks for the support!
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, wasn't Iruka the first one to acknowledge Naruto?
Yeah, anywayz, I have to re-read the first few chapters because I seem to have missed the part during the three weeks - no, I read that, but I missed the part where it gives clues that Sasuke deliberately saved Naruto later on because he wanted him broken...
So...I'll go do that now! YOOOOSH!!
Nice chapter by the way.
Hope you update soon.
And I see Sasuke isn't the only one plotting here! Go Naruto!!
Ki`Tara
Yeah, anywayz, I have to re-read the first few chapters because I seem to have missed the part during the three weeks - no, I read that, but I missed the part where it gives clues that Sasuke deliberately saved Naruto later on because he wanted him broken...
So...I'll go do that now! YOOOOSH!!
Nice chapter by the way.
Hope you update soon.
And I see Sasuke isn't the only one plotting here! Go Naruto!!
Ki`Tara
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. I have to say, also, that I really enjoyed the previous chapter, too. (dark and hot... awesome) Naruto's reasons for being caught are very, very intriguing, and make a lot of sense. Looking forward to the confrontation that is sure to come soon, when Sasuke comes back and Naruto has his renewed sense of purpose... I'm sure sparks will fly. Great job!