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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Please continue!!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I figure I ought to review, seeing how I keep reading your fic. Your style is very different from what I normally read, but its that eerie charm that lures me time after time again. cool chapters, and hopefully many more to come. :-)
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O It seems to me that Naruto knows a lot...but knows every little, as does Sasuke. No I don't have a problem with doctors...but I do have a problem with hospitals. The exact same problem as Naruto does...he hates them and I hate them too, too white and plain. Don't you ever get tired of looking a white and plain? Unless of course you're operating, then it gets interesting ^^. I can't wait for your next update, And does this mean that Naruto is going to eventually break up with Sasuke? Or that they're never going to like the stiuation that they're in?
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol! Wow, well I'll have you know I'm working on three things right now. An update from my first two once shots, since you asked for one. I feel is only a small thing to show you how much I enjoy your stuff too ^^ the first real chapter to rehab and another story i have in the making. I hope to have everything up buy next week sometimes. All three of them. ^^ So keep an eye out for them okay!
Now...on to your review.
This chapter answered...and yet rasied a few questions for me. One being the one that Naruto himself is asking. Just what is going to become of those two? I mean will they find some scene of normal life style together and Sasuke just pull out the slave card when he wants some booty? I really don't think that is the case. Hmmm also I enjoyed the slow flow of things, I mean that ease glow that happens after sex. It was a good come down after such a powerful chapter. I wonder, does Sasuke really love Naruto? Or does he just want to control him? Sometimes it seems like he loves him, and then other times it looks like its all about control...Umm maybe it's a little bit of both? None the less magnificent job...lol as always.
Now...on to your review.
This chapter answered...and yet rasied a few questions for me. One being the one that Naruto himself is asking. Just what is going to become of those two? I mean will they find some scene of normal life style together and Sasuke just pull out the slave card when he wants some booty? I really don't think that is the case. Hmmm also I enjoyed the slow flow of things, I mean that ease glow that happens after sex. It was a good come down after such a powerful chapter. I wonder, does Sasuke really love Naruto? Or does he just want to control him? Sometimes it seems like he loves him, and then other times it looks like its all about control...Umm maybe it's a little bit of both? None the less magnificent job...lol as always.
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, you have added a complex level to these two and their relationship. Their character development was flawless. I can see the progression from their current personalities to fit this roll you've created. Also, you portrayed the sub/dom dynamics with exquisite insight, though some reviewers seem to have no clue what that is...ha. This relationship is the epitome of BDSM. Fabulous. Please, do update. I love your plot.
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Sasuke is so dark and I fine myself really enjoying it. Until this fic I used to shy away from the darker fanfics, but for some reason I am getting into them now. I want to write one, but I don't think I am capable of it. Maybe I will try some day.
Anyway, the lemon was perfect. Everything just...fit. It screamed power. I think you did an excellent job. I enjoyed it. I will continue to read as long as you continue to write.
Anyway, the lemon was perfect. Everything just...fit. It screamed power. I think you did an excellent job. I enjoyed it. I will continue to read as long as you continue to write.
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is "WOW". I don't get in to the pain thing, but the way you write their reactions...Hot!
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You finally wrote the lemon! I was waiting soooo long for it! But I understand that it would take a while, and it was sooo amazing! It was worth it! Hmm, I wonder what will happen afterwards, eh?
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
=^,,^= *full of yaoi happy*
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waw!!! thanks!!! I really love this story!!! This fic is much different than others... There are so many emotions, I fill it... as I think Sasuke has 2 sides: first is love and second is sickness, and they both for Naruto...
SO, plese update soon...
p.s. sorry for my english... it's not my speaking language...
SO, plese update soon...
p.s. sorry for my english... it's not my speaking language...