rate_review Reviews

I almost had second thoughts on reading this, but I'm glad I took the chance. This is such an excellent story. I hope to read more...

*is dead from the sheer intensity of this story*

will Sasuke love Naruto?

Wow, I had mixed views on how I was going to react to the lemons in this story but I liked it :d I think you wrote it well and the insight into both their thoughts helped make it hw I thought - and Naruto yielded as you put it. I can't wait to see where they are going to go from here, it'll be interesting to see. Anyway - last two chapters were really good so yeah ^_6

Hina xXxx

My I'm overjoyed by the out come. Normally you'd expect Sasuke to lose control while with Naruto, and to some level he did. Though it was great to read when Sasuke did take him, but held back enough to not fill him fully. I've never seen that before. Also the blood play did turn out rather well, I would have thought Naruto would have been a bit more fearful due to his treatment at sound, it just goes to show how well Sasuke is a blocking such things out of his mind. Heh also the end just made it all more wonderful, just enough fluff, Naruto got to pet Sasuke to sleep. Man...I'm greatly looking forward to the next chapter. Overall I'm your fan girl...no matter what you write or whoo you pair up, I have faith in you skills woot!

Love this story though still not fully understands Sasuke.
Good job though!

Naruto is such a doormat in this fic...yet this kind of Naruto is still oh so satisfying.

UPDATE SOON~!

Sasuke should pay for his sins.

heehee. thanks for responding to my review. It's just that dark fics depress me, but this does the exact opposite. oh I hope you continue with such excellent updates! I think I have a dark side because I love this story sooo much 0_0 (is supposed to do work)

Sasuke definately has some problems. It's like he has a split personality!
Oh, and a question.
What did Sasuke mean when he said 'Kyuubi is being true to our deal?'
Did he talk to Kyuubi?

I really hope Naruto finally gets that if Sasuke hadn't been screwing around with, well, everyone, that when his turn finally came, Naruto would be very very hurt instead of very very pleased. I also hope that Naruto gets that Sasuke does love him, in his Sasuke-ish sort of way. Hopefully Sasuke can also lighten up, the teme. Love him dearly, but he's still such a teme. ~ Jelp

Ah. Poor Naru. He still doesn't get it. I do adore your continuing characterization, though a purring Sasuke had me choking with laughter. I'm sure that seeing him reduced to such a state would be intoxicating...I am so glad I stumbled across your fic, and I can't wait to read more.