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for Breaking Apart

by cloudydayz

person Anon
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was odd, but yet sweet lemon. Awaiting the next chapter!!
person Jelp
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Naruto finally got to experience the pleasure that Sasuke can give. Update ASAP please! ~ Jelp
person kotikiz
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please, update!
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O

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Wow...erm...That's realy something. I honestly don't think I could have come up with a fic like this. Please continue.
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
twitch... o. m. g. i just read chapter seven and eight, and i want more! this is so... grr, i don't know. but more, please!!~
person Damp
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Although I really like this...I must say I am VERY confused...No not about the past and everything but was was Sasuke talking about, with the whole Shino thing? I don't think Naruto's been cheating on Sasuke right?
person mukki
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your updating tomorrow? Tomorrow?!?! Yaaaaaaaaaaay!!
person AerieTigre
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting turn. Could just be natural defensive justification, but it's still sexy. =0,,~=
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
;-; I liked that... I'm so glad you wrote chapter seven before this one. It really did go with it...heh...okay....Sasuke's crazy...but not too crazy...i guess he does love..or at least care deeply for naruto on some level. Though he's still pissed about the Shino thing...hehe kinda hot! I'm can't wait for tomorrow to come!
person suzie
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.. who is going to save him