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UPDATE! please...

Let the lemon begin! *I'm so evil when it comes to rape Naruto* (forgive me naruto!)

Eh. You know what I mean.

Well, either way I think the lemon will be interesting. I do wonder what will be going through Naruto's mind the entire time, though. And what will he think of Sasuke afterwards? Will he trust him? I'm glad you said this is still a romance story, because I do love dark stories with romance. I rarely read/write fluff because romance isn't all happy and fun. I love angst/romance because it's so much more real. However, my favorite type of stories are those with extremly angsty plots, with a happy ending.

And you like my stories? I didn't know that...

oh my gosh! i love it! please update soon im dying of mere excitment over that last chapter!

Still interested in story. Please continue!!

This chapter made me very very sad - this is angst at its most extreme I think and extremely dark. But I liked it, I thought it was well written :)... but Sasuke seems to me like he's lost it, there's this seriously twisted edge to his character that really makes me want to kill (?) him. I mean, he doesn't even acknowledge that what he was doing with Shino was wrong, he just didn't want Naruto to find out because he wouldn't 'understand' but not because he regreeted it and then he has the f****** nerve to call Naruto a liar? Damn teme! Anyway... I have mixed feelings on the upcoming lemon - I want to read it and yet because I know it's probably going to be awfull for Naruto... hmm... well update soon and we'll see, ne?

^_^ Hina
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this chapter was great! don't worry about sasuke being too sadistic. honestly, it's great for this story and you're just staying true to what his character is within the world you've created. if he was suddenly giving naruto roses or buying him chocolates...then it'd just be weird. keep up the great work!

I really do hope you make Naruto enjoy his er..."true" first time. Poor Naruto. ~ Jelp

Well, you're not turning me off LOL! It is nice to read something different. I honestly really like it. I can even look past the fact that he cheated on my sweet Naru because it's fresh and new, and well, I've run out of things to say. It's really good though. Okay, now I've run out things to say.