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for Breaking Apart

by cloudydayz

person waruwaru
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For fuck sake Naruto snap out of it and kill/beat him! *pulls hair in frustration*

Sorry...a bit dratsic there!^^;
Sasuke is really...a psyko...I mean really...Damn - he scares me.
I just wonder what will happen after Sasuke..well kind of Rape's Naruto there on the bed.
Oh, my - this is getting really intresting...
Update soon, ne?
person Stacy
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! It's about time that lemon showed up! I'll be at the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.....don't make me wait to long!!!!
person kotikiz
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAW!!! Fantastic!!!! Cant wait next chapter!!!! UPDAPE SOON.
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh! this is really good, and i can't wait for more! i'm actually kind of excited for this lemon (of course, i'm always excited for a decent lemon) and i hope it's good! i haven't read much bondage/BDSM, but this looks promising... hope to see another chapter soon!~
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I go through withdrawel when you don't update...this fic is like a drug...
person Mija
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh dont worry, I am not disturbed at all...wierd huh?? you think not being disturbed about it makes me a disturbed sort of person?? lol, dunno, Ive always been a bit odd like that, and yes its fanfiction, when things like that happen in RL its a tradgedy, but one a person can survive and move on from, for the most part, lots dont, but anyhow I am liking this fic, I sooooooo want to see Sasuke get broken by Naru but if it doesnt happen soo k, as you said and I have said this is a story, not real life and that is something I can deal with, with storys you can write what ever sort of ending you want, be it a happpy or sad one and I myself being the type of person who adores LOTS of styles, dont mind reading fics about stuff that has happend to me before..so no worries k?? doing a great job, Sasuke reminds me of a really possesive bf I had, he was not nice at all, very abusive, and me very stupid lol, anyhow, great work hope to read more, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Mija
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh and I also wanted to add just like everyone else is, SAsuke is some screwed up piece of work, he is definitly a scary charactor and as much as I hoped it wouldnt come to it, I know there will be pain involved in one way or another, good job of making Sasuke ubber asshole, he soo fits it lol, even though I lurves him...but in this, hes certificably nutso and scares the jeepers creepers out of me...guys with his mind set oftne do, you want to hit upside the head for being so self absorbed and dense but on the other hand are scared to set them off on some homicidal rage lol, huggles and smiles Mija.....:-)
person animehead
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
With the crap going on in my screwed up life, it really makes me LOVE this story. It's dark, and at the momment...so am I. I honestly cannot wait for the next chapter. I could go on and on, but then I would be just ranting about my sucky situation and I know you don't want to hear that BS, so I'll just say that I am loving this story, and you have gained a loyal reader and reviewer.
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*_* you enjoy my work! Well as much as I loved you before...now I love you even more! This was good, man I was so scared for Shino's sake...but damn Shino's got some mad skills. Give it up for the Bugman! Wow...Naruto is in deep shit isn't he? I mean like shoulder deep...man...it's dark and I know bad stuff is going to happen, yet...I can't stop reading. Also I loved when Sasuke found out...Shino came off as the nanny nanny kinda guy. Mmhmm your good...keep it up dear!
person dar
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow....I love the fact that you made sasuke not be able to kill anyone he wants, giving him that all powerful feel. I am anticipating and scared of naruto of what sasuke will do to him, I hope Naruto will put up something of a fight, but thinking of his past....I really anticipate reading the next chappie!!!!! Please Keep Up the Good Work!!!! and Please UPDATE SOON!!!