rate_review Reviews

i so love this chapter it was really neat. is the technique that shino used a real one or one that you made up. i also like how you made sasuke think to make his chakra poisionious to shino's bugs to that was original. i can't wait to read another chapter of crazy sexy cool sasuke (that's my nickname for your fic). can't wait for the naxt update.

I don't mind Sasuke's sadisticness at all. Its what makes the story different, ne? Anyway, wow, so Sasuke now knows that Naruto knows. This is gonna get crazy i'm sure. I feel kinda bad for Naruto. Surely this all stems out of love for the dobe...right? Update soon.

This is soo good how did you come up with something like this. I like how sasuke is a complete nut case lol it's almost like he has two personalities.CAN"T wait for the next chapter keep this fic as dark as it is. :)

wow, awesome defense shino has, and i luved the reaction sasuke had when he first learned that naruto knew about his affairs , i can't wait to read more please update soon :P

This story is fast becoming one of my favourites.

Now Sasuke knows Naruto knows...dun-dun-dun-duuuunnn!! What will happen next? Oh lawdy, send poor Naru-chan a savior! Don' let Sasuke have his way with him - please!

P.S: How I got the italics to work? [Lmao], I used to have this same problem when I first started writing a story and when I got told how to do it, I spent five minutes of my reading time thinking how foolish I was for not noticing something this simple and easy. It's basically like any other html programming thingy-majig.

Italics: < i > "Your speech or whatever" < / i > (Of course, you'll have to get rid of the space).

Bold: < b > "Your speech or whatever" < / b > (Again, delete the space).

To underline: < u > "Blah-Blah" < / u > (You know what to do to the space...)

That's all I know at the moment. But there's also headings:

< h1 > "Title" < / h1 > - This is the biggest form of headings. If you want the font to be smaller, for example, as a sub-title or something or the other, simply change the h1 to h2 and so on and so forth. H4 is the smallest, h1 being the largest.

Errm, I hope I was of some use to you. Update soon!

Ki`Tara

I think you're doing a fantastic job with the perspectives! No need to worry! In fact, you do an amazing job picking up on details from each chapter.

I really enjoyed the exchange between Sasuke and Shino. It's great to see someone stand up to Sasuke with such confidence. Throughout the anime and manga, I've felt quite indifferent about Shino, but you've made me really enjoy his character.

Please update soon! (:

this is coming along very well, and, actually, i'm liking the idea of shinoxnaru now too... but dang, that's not supposed to happen! shino is MY man!!! >