rate_review Reviews

You know I've never really cared for Shino. Not that I didn't like him he just never appealed to me (plus I hate bugs). And I've never considered a Naruto/Shino fic. But if you write one I will definitly read it!

I am liking this fic so far. Yes, Naruto and Sasuke are OOC - if you compare them to their 12-year-old counterparts. Who knows what years and years of changing times and traumatic situations will do to a person. You are justified in writing them however you want. It is a dark fic, and that's one thing that sets it apart from a lot of the other ones on AFF.

I have to say this, and I don't mean it as an insult in any way. I really enjoyed your Author's Note. Like really really. I'm still trying to figure out why, but strangely enough, it's probably my favorite thing I've read today.

Please keep working on the story, and I'll definitely keep reading.

Let me tell you this...I don't have my version of Sasuke because I don't bother with trying to see "underneath the underneath" as Kakashi says. So yea, when I read a fanfic I love to see how far authors stretch the character. I always ask myself, "Is this how Sasuke would react?" or "Is that what she really would have done?", when I'm reading their fanfic. I liked how you explained your character's OOCness, though I really didn't mind...your not the only one who's made a character seem bogus *not that I'm saying they're bogus*. It's your story, we all say to "blend in" but then again we also say "be an individual" ...So "blending in" is totally redundent..."You're an individual, be an individual. Don't blend in, blend out!"

That’s it, dobe. Want me. You are going to need all of your desire pretty soon to survive becoming my lover. And time is up, baby. Time is up. ~~ OMG I love Sasuke in this. And I love you for uploading that fast. I can't wait for more xD Sasuke is such a bastard and this is why I like him the most. In manga he is little emo but in your story he is everything I wish he would be. Luv ya ;*

ah! Update soon!! This story is captivating @_@

good god! he scares me too!! and, no, i don't find this as cliche as i thougt it might be when i clicked on it. this is honestly something i haven't seen great job, and i can't wait for the next chapter!!~

Wow, Sasuke is so seriously sadistic here. *shivers* Who's gonna protect poor Naruto from all of this? Anyway, like it so far. Do update esoon.

i have recently discovered that i have a strange liking to dark fics involving SasuNaru....you have now just satisfied my sick thirst for this, and i love ya for it!!! thank you!!! i can't wait to see what happens next!!!

-Jenn

AAWW shino was (kinda) nice, and i have to admit i thought it was adorable when he said "if i had you, i'd do the same thing" to naruto ^.^

AAWWW again! for some reason i found sasuke in the last chapter cute in some twisted depraved way. (its not that he got rid of shino either >.<) its just, he's trying so hard i guess. i dunno. its 7am i need to go to sleep -.-