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Oh! So I re-read chapter 18 again and nearing the end, an idea came to mind. This whole time I thought it was Naruto who would be the one to break as indicated in the title. However, now that thought of mine is waning and I'm not so positive if that’s true. I think it might be Sasuke who's actually the one to break in the end considering this new ray of light Sasuke has stepped into while becoming a changed man. But, it could be both Naruto and Sasuke that break each other. Hmm... I hope the ending is not too extremely depressing. I've read my share of very good sasunarusasu pairing stories that in the end turned out to have Naruto or Sasuke die or they’re separated from one another physically or socially. I hate that kind of depressing material even though I'm subjected to reading it every day. Still, I suppose until the chapters start up again, I'll just have to keep to my never ending brain-storming ideas of what you have planned for "Breaking Apart." Take care, cloudy!

~SasuNaru723~

Hey! Was looking to see if you had updated...guess not. Hopefully you'll upload a few chapters soon ^_^ Anyways, until then have a great summer!

Hey cloudy!

I hope you've fully recovered from your surgery. How's the new change of weather been treating you? Anyways, just wondering how you're update for Breaking Apart is going, not meaning to sound like a nag or rush you. I know I too deserve from nagging from fans that have been waiting to see a new chapter from a story of mine for nearly more than half a year! Hahaha. Mmm well I hope you haven't lost your touch or motivation for this story. I still thinks it’s the best story out there for a SasuNaru pairing and it’s definitely my favorite one next to Spiral Falling. You just bring out this sadistic side of Sasuke that I like but you also show that even though Naruto is bottom, he's not easy to surrender without a fight. I'm excited to read more of your beautiful material soon the moment you update chapter 20!

Happy St Patrick’s Day to you!! ^_^

~SasuNaru723~

I do hope you feel better!! Surgery is never fun.
I love this story!! Its so…macabre!! Not to sound like some goth stalker or anything. But it truly is lovely in its own repugnant way. I've been reading it in class, my Business Law teacher thinks I'm a perv because she was nosey and read over my sholder. Well I'll try to leave as many reviews as I can, you're actually the second person I've ever reviewed. Till then au revoir!!

So I was just wondering how everything is going... its been almost a month and the update schedule was supposed to be like every 2 weeks so hope all is well in real life ;-) Best wishes and hope your '09 is off to a great start!

I am very glad that you have not forgotten about this history and about us. I - every day, search for the new chapter. I - love your Saske and Naruto, and I think that they are the best characters from many history. Two characters who are worthy the friend the friend. I very much hope that they will torment to understand, before, each other that they are created for each other. I with impatience wait the new chapter where Naruto will try to leave from Saske. Саске the proprietor - such charm. I hope that at you all will be good with health, and I wish you побыстее to recover. Sorry for errors

I read the last two chapters again and I'm on the edge of my seat!!! I am so conflicted... in certain ways they fit perfectly and in other ways they've destroyed their relationship with the choices each has made especially Sasuke. It is kind of worrisome to see what "suprises" Sasuke has in store and if Naruto will be able to break free. Also, it should be interesting how Neji juggles their imminent separation since Sasuke is a clan member but Naruto is a friend. How the night unfolds and what occurs in the Sand village will no doubt be incredibly compelling ;-)

Well, I am enthralled by this story. Yes, it is dark, but it's captivating! It doesn't allow for me to turn away and run. I hated Naruto for being weak when I knew he was strong, stronger than Sasuke. I hated Sasuke for seeking others to satisfy his sexual desires that he could not do with out. Then I realized in chapter 18 it was Sasuke that hated the weak Naruto. It makes sense.
Sasuke does deserves some hard times. I love that this story addresses both Sasuke and Naruto and "uke and seme" questions. I personally think that they BOTH interchange within the roles as givers and takers. Kudos to you for making it possible.
Neji and Shikamaru as a couple is on point. I love how Naruto had a sexual past; man, I loved that discovery.
Godspeed on your recovery and enjoy that Holidays. Take care

Wow! You were sick? Well I'm really glad that after surgery your feeling much better. Always take care of yourself before your stories, which you have and that's great. I believe you'll definitely finish Breaking Apart with flying colors of success. I hope you're getting a good amount of snow and enjoying the holidays of this winter, cloudy! I'll be keeping in mind of your update within the next few weeks whenever you get around to finishing the next chapter. Happy holidays to you and keep warm! ^_^

~SasuNaru723~

Hope your holiday season is going well! Will you put up an AN about what's going on with the story or better yet a new chapter? ;-) Good luck w/this!