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for Breaking Apart

by cloudydayz

person goldie
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Geez Shino, talk about mind screwage...

This chapter doesn't disappoint at all. Far from it! At least we now see some of Shino's viewpoint; it's interesting to learn that he also loves Naruto. Oh Shino..

Naruto is so lost right now. I hope he doesn't unintentionally do anything to 'upset' Sasuke, especially since that bastard's so unpredictable. (and possessive!) Naruto's optimistic mind is what seems to draw so many to him, and I hope he can someday rise up from his damaged state. I can't wait to see what Sasuke does in his suspicion. (I'm almost worried about Shino... XD)
person kotikiz
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!! PLEASE, UPDATE SOON!!!!
person insomniac001
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! YOu really have to update this, yeah! So sad............ ;.; poor naruto, going through so much hell..............*sigh* its' so sad... Update soon! ^^
person waruwaru
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I find this story really fascinating! I just waiting to see how far Sasuke and Naruto is going to take this… before the BOMB finally blows up in there faces.
And Sasuke is really like a psychopath, that has ONE and ONLY obsession. Naruto in this case…somehow is the only way he know how to live… see:
His first obsession was:
1)Be better than his brother (when he was little)
2) Getting power(the snake had someting to do with that to.>__>)
3) Killing Itachi (Avenge his clan)
4) Make Naruto his possession. (His current priority )

Sasuke had it coming…he was fucking raised to be a waco/psyko!=S *He kind of scares me*
Anyway…all exited about this dark fic! Can’t wait to see more of it - your doing a good job on it!^^
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.o Sasuke crazy. That's all to it...he's fucking crazy! Like trapped behind a glass wall kinda crazy...hell I'm scared of him...and at the same time...I find it oddly arousing! I love it! Though...Shino's not gonna die...is he?! I mean I know he's gonna be pissed at Shino but still...Sasuke won't kill him will he?
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke scares you? Hell, sasuke is scaring me!!! I mean - his character is really really dark in this fic and it's pissing me off that he's acting so f****** superiori deciding when Naruto has 'put out' so to speak when he's probably been screwing half of Konoha!!! Anyway, really good as it was the last chapter ^_^ can't wait for the next one.

Hina xXxx
person Kayla
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving the fact that a new chapter is out everyday, but this is so good, that I still need more. It's like an addiction. -.-; What a sad soul I am lol. =^.^=
person Bubbles
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaaahhh!!!
Sasuke thoughts are so weird, they're scary!!!
anyway great chappy again, but short...or mayby I'm just greedy!!! LOL
Please, update soon!!!
person Pic's Pixie
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i'm totally getting addicted to this story now, i was so pissed at sasuke and shino b4 but now i just want to know what sasuke is going to do next , i think he's totally going to flip out if he finds out that shino likes naruto too :S, poor lil naru has no clue, well not much of a clue, can't wait to see what happens to open his eyes, update soon k
person celticfx
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You updated! Hooray! I really enjoyed this chapter. It was almost a second part to chapter two (first seeing Naruto's perpective and then Sasuke's). Sasuke IS getting scary (but in an entertaining, I-can't-wait-to-see- what-he'll-do-next type of way!). Poor Naruto! Looking forward to your next chapter!