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Love it!

No matter how dark this fanfic turns, I hope that it has a happy ending!

I love you! You have no idea how long it's been since I've read a GOOD naruto fic. I was starting to give up hope and then poof here you come along like magic! I could kiss you and hug you.....em but you might not like that so instead I will just say thank you so much. I love a little sadistic madness and not many people can pull that off cause they tend to go to overbored and it dosen't seem real or they don't go far enough cause there scared to be dark. You've achieved the perfect balance. And the twists that come along with it! like that Shino part or in the second chapter with how aware naruto is. It's like you think you know but each chapter makes you think over the previous chapter. It's so in depth! I love you again! Thank you so much I can't wait for the next chapters^^

please update asap!
im'a soo exited what will happen next!

X3 X3 X3 You're making my psych bunnies go nuts over here. XD XD XD
At this rate, Shino's just confusing the poor boy. Naruto can't understand something so out of the context he's been thinking in, especially to the extent you're taking this. He doesn't know what the uber controlfreak mindset is like; he can't comprehend what Shino's trying to warn him about. Dammit, Shino, you're smarter than that, you should know: spell it out for the poor boy! ...just a thought I was mentally screaming to the computer. =9,,9= ;; Kudos on making me do that.
But surely someone like Iruka or Tsunade would have noticed something disturbing by now? Or, yanno, anyone with a brain? This whole web isn't that convoluted, is it?
Wow, I'm interested in a plot and hot at the same time? This is a novel cocktail of a concept. *laughs* I'd feel terrible if this weren't fiction. Hell, I feel kinda bad anyway.
Idunno. I just know you're my current fic-god. *worship*

Awesome!! What can I really say?? You wrote it!!

Shino is as much of a twisted prick as Sasuke, but at least he seems more stable. Poor Naruto.

What a lovely fic you've got going here. It's such a nice change from all the mushy romances you see out there. It's a welcome change. I'm excited to see what Naruto will say to Shino, though, I have to say, if I were in Naruto's shoes...Shino would be a dead ninja walking! *snickers*

Eh...I think it good but i don't really get it...*or maybe i'm just an idiot?*
Sasuke is in LOVE with Naruto, but fuck's Shino? Sure, he get a bit frustrated but hey...he can just jack off. or...something...>__>
Cheating is just so...harch...do you really CHEAT on someone you claim to LOVE? I think that Naruto should tell that sheating bastard that he KNOW'S that he is fucking around.
Anyway - it's an intresting story, really looking forward to the Naruto and Shino talk.^^

I LOVE your story! You've written it with so much emotion and expressed it through all of the characters SO well! I can't wait to see how Naruto acts upon Sasuke's betrayal. I would love to seem him get a little revenge after all the Sasuke has done to him. Wow! Great job!

Whoa - well written. Very, very dark.... Don't groan, but is there going to be any sweetness in this? Poor, poor Naruto!