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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
plz plz plz let naru-chan leave sasuke and find sumone who really loves him. BY THE WAY LOVING YOUR STORY speacially how u portray sasuke i love him when he's all crazy. i also really love it when naruto finds sumone else to love him and he get so jealous the bastard deserves it.;)
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!!!
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well. this is an... intersting story. i can't wait to see what happens. sadistic as this may sound, the entire reason i clicked to read this was because of the rape warning, even though i've read SO many rape-fics, i think i have to read them all... anyway, good job so far, update soon!!~
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, finally a sadistic Sasuke fic that doesn't fail! I'm glad that you've gone deep into Sasuke's POV so we readers can at least see where he is coming from... despite being off the wall nuts. XD
He seems to care about Naruto though, and it's obvious that Shino or whoever else he sleeps with aren't important to him. Just people to satisfy his lust. But from Naruto's vulnerable and damaged POV, things are going to seem more dramatic than they are. (right?)
Shino smirking at him was pretty rude though, and he won't be so cocky when he sees he's just being used.
Either way, I love how this story's going and can't wait for the next chapter!!
He seems to care about Naruto though, and it's obvious that Shino or whoever else he sleeps with aren't important to him. Just people to satisfy his lust. But from Naruto's vulnerable and damaged POV, things are going to seem more dramatic than they are. (right?)
Shino smirking at him was pretty rude though, and he won't be so cocky when he sees he's just being used.
Either way, I love how this story's going and can't wait for the next chapter!!
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn...this is good, i'm kinda scared to se what will happen next, yet at the same time I'm dying to know. Very addictive...wonderful job!
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg. wicked totally wicked. i love your depiction of Sasuke, he sounds totally sadistic and insane at some levels. i wish to read the next chapter soon, so do continue writing.
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You said that it was dark.....and boy were you right! And I loved every single line of it!! Update quickly
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was deliciously fragmented and poetic, a completly believable insane!sasuke. something about sasuke makes me want to either hurt him or turn him into this crazy meta-avenger of some sort, and i feel like this characterization here is spot on for Sasuke, falling apart in his own head. please please continue, its hurts a little but i am teh masochist ^.^