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by cloudydayz

person Angel
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Howdy Cloudy :)

I'm a stalker :) - I have not signed on with any of these forums so naturally I check on this story at least once a day for the update ha ha.

Hint hint hint... this hiatus has not in any way dimmed the emotions and psychoses of this story but the anticipation is mighty fretting he he he
person Ivy
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my surgery sucks :-( I had one a few years ago and recovering can be awfully unpleasant. Glad that you are feeling better though!!!
person Angel
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Am sorry to hear you have been unwell but am glad your surgery was a success and wish you a speedy recovery :)
person Jelp
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry to hear that you haven't been feeling very well! That's never any fun.

I hope that you feel better soon - well, even better now that your surgery is over and done with. Good luck with writing! :D ~ Jelp
person Anon
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, I'm glad you're alright.

I look forward to the updates in the future. If I can't review right away, I'll definitely get around to it. I check this site pretty regularly, so I'll definitely be alerted if your story gets updated. (Let's hope I can survive through it, it's a real soul-wrencher.)
person Calucia
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear. Hope you get well soon, hope you make a full recovery. Look forward to the continuation of this story.
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! I'm sorry you've been ill, but I'm glad you are feeling better. *huggles* I hope your recovery goes smoothly and quickly. And good luck with the writing too. I love this story and look forward to the updates :)
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you feel better soon!
:(
person Angel
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just checking to see whether you have updated!!! I check everyday but now am starting to worry... you know the content of this story has all the setup of being a mind-screw :) and the emotional content you have compounded it with, well I'd be crushed if you didn't continue. You said you wrote it for therapy? Goodness gracious hope you still need it :)

person Angel
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
About bloody time! I’m a prude, I abhor dark fics, non-consensual blah blah blah just darkness in general. I cannot handle it, maybe I’m just weak or understand life is dark enough without searching for it, you know?

So yes, I read the warnings, yes I read all those ugly words that I run from, but the first line was so deceptive and inciting. I read it. Then another line and another.

It was pretty clear to me this is not the fic for me to be reading but I was glued. Sasuke is mad. Naruto is a - I don’t know but some bloody mess. Sasuke is a corpse. A freaking psychotic corpse. Ewwwwwwww to all the sex sorry I only read Sasuke and Naruto, so Sasuke and Shino bloody hell, I want to put a chidori though Sasuke’s heart and bloody run Shino over with something lol.

Then hellllllllllllllooooooooooooooo you made me cry!???!! Naruto in utter bloody stupidity, shivers spewing some crap about only being strong to defend, so bloody pathetic in a fic this dark…I find myself crying…because it is so out of it, yet so compoundingly true Naruto Uzumaki.

Then came THE CHAPTER and against myself I read it…all the while thinking I have Zrina’s SoD to refer to, to rinse the bile IF YOU WERE REALLY HEADING THAT WAY.

Then Sasuke whipped Naruto and I want him DEAD!!! DEAD!!! And I thought no, I can’t read anymore but again, something just propelled me to continue, and it hurts more that Sasuke even in his madness can’t bring himself to hurt Naruto. He holds off, he bargained with Kyubi. You are killing me!!!

I’m still so afraid, I’m about to read chapter 12 now but am just so relieved, it’s about bloody time Naruto comes out of the closet lol … the fact he just now realises he lives with Sasuke bwaaaaaaaah! I’m so glad to see him recognise a backbone that I’m giddy. I don’t know whether to curse his love or just keep crying – to know he willingly put himself through that for Sasuke … okay at this stage, it’s obviously crying that’s winning out.

I love how Sasuke characterises him – not stupid but oblivious!!! Soooo true!

BTW oh my gosh!!! I love how you made me begrudgingly love Shino!!! He is one kewl cat and the fact he loves Naruto – in the sense he recognises his true strength…

Okay onwards and upwards … still reading hesitantly and afraid, there is still so much uncertainty and this could go sooooo ugly, but I have hope …

You have a knack of stripping down characters and situations to the bare essentials that it doesn’t matter what you throw on them, their true colours just shine… It’s a gift and I’m glad you’re sharing and despite my trepidation I’m glad I read this …