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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE...LOL! ITS JUST I LOVE THIS STORY AND PLUS IM A SUCKER FOR HAPPY ENDINGS! AND THIS STORY IS SO [HOW TO SAY IT] NOT HORROR, BUT HOW HUMAN PEOPLE INTERACT AND ABOUT LOVE! YOU CREATED A FINELY TUNED STORY! AMAZING JOB, CHICA! YOU HAVE MY RESPECT...TAKE CARE AND KEEP UPDATING!
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome...awesome...awesome
This update from Sasukes POV absolutely was worth waiting for.
Setting up the next chapter so erotically, so beautifully.
With your descriptions of both of their physical attributes, their inner thoughts and the words they have spoken, without giving away your intentions, you have allowed possibilities to keep me so addicted to this story.
It is intriguing and darkly sexy.
Will you marry me?
love
garfield
(hsbs at LJ and DA)
This update from Sasukes POV absolutely was worth waiting for.
Setting up the next chapter so erotically, so beautifully.
With your descriptions of both of their physical attributes, their inner thoughts and the words they have spoken, without giving away your intentions, you have allowed possibilities to keep me so addicted to this story.
It is intriguing and darkly sexy.
Will you marry me?
love
garfield
(hsbs at LJ and DA)
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! I almost forgot how deep this fic was. This is a truly dark and twisted side of Sasuke that I've ever read. You've written him so well that he jumps off the screen. It's sad thought, to me Sasuke is the one that was broken, that's fragile. He so needs Naruto to keep him sane, even though he seems crazy.
But these two need each other. I know some bad shit has to happen in order for them to realize this, but what happens will happen.
I leave my manic ramblings with one of my favorite lines "This to shall pass" Should be both Sasuke's and Naruto's mantras.
Please update soon
But these two need each other. I know some bad shit has to happen in order for them to realize this, but what happens will happen.
I leave my manic ramblings with one of my favorite lines "This to shall pass" Should be both Sasuke's and Naruto's mantras.
Please update soon
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm glad you took a step back and showed Sasuke side, it really did put everything out there. I got where Sasuke was coming from and though I thought him crazy at first...in an Uchiha kinda way it makes perfect since. Great chapter can't wait for the next one. No rush mind you, this story is worth waiting for ^^
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sasukes either paranoid or hes extremely smart, i think its alittle of both especially with the way he thinks of things.if whoever you healed became yours after than doctors would have alotta people by now and those people would ahve free medical attention probly...yano,that wouldnt be so bad.well hope you can update, eventually
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Actually I very much agree with you, cloudy. This chapter helps us –well me I guess –see Sasuke’s point of view during Naruto’s efforts to make this a ‘one night’ deal. Just like all the other chapters you’ve written with Sasuke’s point of view in them, this one doesn’t leave any disappointment whatsoever. It was an excellent update! Also I can now see Sasuke realizes Naruto is trying to leave. I’m not surprised Sasuke isn’t planning on letting Naruto go. Don’t keep us in the waiting for too long! I look forward to what you have in store for us reading fans in the next chapter!
~SasuNaru723~
~SasuNaru723~
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holly C*** they are F****** Insane!!! @.@ OMG I love this fic it's soooo twisted(in a good way) that I cant begin to make up my mind on who is more out of it. I men seriously it's like they are competing to see who is more out there. I want to hate Sasuke and I want to smack Naruto but in the end, some how they make me go awwww poor sick little puppy.o.o; Im sad that I only found out about your fick yesterday but im glad that i got to read 18 chapters in one.... two go's, seriously i locked my self in my room and put up a do not distub sign up O.O. I look forward to your next chapter and pleeas now that you ahve come back to this fic dont stay away too long. O.~
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woah, this story is really dark...
But I like it! I am a sucker for happy endings, but I have a feeling I won't be getting one this time :(
But I like it! I am a sucker for happy endings, but I have a feeling I won't be getting one this time :(
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You did it! You came back with a vengeance :huggles: I'm so proud of ya!
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So glad that you updated!!! It was good that you wrote this chapter in Sasuke's perspective to see what was going on in his mind. Its great how lingering questions are flushed out and answered in each chapter. They both seem a little out there with their reasoning for their decisions but that's what makes this story so compelling. I like the dynamic you've established and I'm glad you don't rush your lemons. Please don't take months for your next chapter ^_^