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for Dangerous Obsession

by LolitaLenna

schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What happened to Shizune. Who is still alive and where is everyone else. Hope you keep up the writing and please update so I can understand what is happening. What happened to her when she was in the shack and what is Kankuro going to do....
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schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OoOoo i think it was good and i really hope Itachi did the crime because it whould be to chiche if sasuke did it and kinda obvious but that's just my opinion i just don't like sasuke very much but other than that this story is really good the plot is good and your suspence is awsome and a good cliffie too!! i can't wait for the next chappie!!! i hope you update soon!!!!!

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schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious, interesting way to set up the mystery first instead of the romance. It's good to put plot first. Shizune's death was shocking. I hope you'll get into more of that later on.