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person shadowphoenix143
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, Kakashi is crazy! I'm so glad that Naruto is staying with Sasuke now and they are becoming closer! :)
Sasuke needs to tell Naruto the truth though because he deserves to know! Awesome story so far, I can't wait to read more!
person Mort
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
amazing writing style, I normal avoid this pairing, but you've gotten me hooked- Kakashi's obsessions with his past affections give the story a bitter/sweet twist that keeps it intriguing- I am looking forward to yur continuation lovely writing-
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story, and I really like it. Very original.
person Sendrine
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how this story slipped under my radar but I'm glad I found it. Kakashi is quite villainous which surprised me. My perception of him has certainly been challenged :) I love the conversations he is having with himself, and it reminds me a bit of the "devil on the shoulder" cliche. Sasuke's restraint is admirable but I'm wondering how much longer it is going to be before he's on the same route as Kakashi. And poor Naruto o_o, what will happen when he finds out?! I hope that you continue the story soon >_< xx
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this one. Great and creepy storytelling. Please update soon!
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.. kakashi is scary.
person roely
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi is evil! i love it! how cute!
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Sasuke rescued Naruto from freezing to death! Now they are all alone and going to sleep together. Sasuke has been sweet to Naruto and kept himself from molesting him. Love this chapter. :)
person akume
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome man. I can't believe Kakashi can be so underhanded and Naruto so naive. Anyway, I can't wait for chapter three. Until then. Ja.
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Kakashi is one sick bastard in this story! I love how you write him! I sure hope that Sasuke finds a way to save Naruto from Kakashi's molestations/rape.