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Cute story!
Hope you update soon!XD

I loved it.
Sakura's nipples. lol.

erm... well, I've only read the first chapter so far, so the verdict's still out on this one, but what exactly is a "chakra shaped mercury key" supposed to be? I mean, chakra is life-energy, and mercury is a poisonous liquid.

I like attention to detail; too often authors skimp on the little things and their work suffers for it. But there is a thing as too much detail -- I think you're trying too hard to make things seem soooper speshul. I also think that the first "chapter" seemed a bit uneventful. Naruto trained. Naruto went to see Tsunade. Sasuke was locked up. Description is good, but we could use a little more actual content, as well. Still, I only caught a couple little typos/grammatical errors, which puts far above most of the authors here.

It could use improvement, but it doesn't suck.

Aaaaaaaaaw that was cute!

awww! kawaii! i love a happy ending. ^_^

I liked it. It could have been better if there were a bit more....build up, ya know what I mean? I just kind of feel like there should have been a bit more in between the bebining and the kiss; explaing the relationship better,but it was still good. :) Is it going to have more chapters?

this sounds good please up date soon.

love this story so far.

its so kawaii.. haha.. pretty cool.. i hope i can read the next chapter real soon.. its a great fic.. thanks for posting it anyways.. keep rockin dude.. ^^

Hey just wanted to tell you YOU ARE AWESOME and you better keep writing cuz is really good and I want to know what happens ok? please update soon...
ja!...