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for When He Comes

by GoldenSensei

person KawaiiKoneko89
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT!!! You MUST update ASAP! =^^= ByE!


Koneko-chan
person someone
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i totally love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue!
person Catsura
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesomeness! weeeeeee!
person chopsticks
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh! you have to put more!!!! unless its a 2-shot, but it shouldnt be, because its so good!
person Asheita
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wicked! Please update soon! =)
-TCK
person Shinigami24
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*perks up in interest* Izumo, can you PLEASE tell me what Shikamaru does at night? I really would love to know the answer...As for Sakura-NO surprise there, I figured she would be a yaoi fangirl! I think Ino could be one too, once Sai converted her...I saw this Naruto comic a while back, in it Sai was a major yaoi fanboy, and he was introduced Ino to yaoi, then Ino got Sakura too as well...So is there anyone else, that are watching Sasuke and Naruto? I know Kotetsu and Shikamaru are too, but what about Sakura and Naruto's other friends? Surely by now Neji would have noticed!
person riddlestar
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story, definately waiting for the next chappie..

ps : i assume ure american.. and from Texas..hehehe..
person kotikiz
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAW!!!! I realy like it!!!!
person mary
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now that is getting good.....smut if your up for it but good plot so far.
person noezel7
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am extreemly jealous!! I too just started a sasunaru fanfic but it is crap compared to yours. I just can't find a fluid easy way for Naruto and Sasuke to enter a relationship. Anyway, this story is very good, not relying on chliche plot lines to further the story. Keep writing, I'm sure it will only get better with time, like good wine!!