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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i don't know what number review i am for this chapter but biznatch #5 (fav. number) reporting for duty. i think this was another super chapter. i think you have a nice flow to your story so far and you can't tell it's not beta'd so don't worry about it because i think you are doing fine. can't wait for the next chapter. by nthe way is sasuke going to have any interesting competition like say sai or gaara.
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! *giggles* i love those two. Love reading happy stories . Is there going to be more?
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
voyerism is one of my favorites lol. Okay they were only being watched while they kissed but still, it was good. I'm glad you decided to keep writing this story, I really do like it a lot and can't wait to read more.
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEE! NOT THERE, NOT THERE! UPDATE ASAP I WANT MORE!
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will there be a lemon in the next chapter? That was great. Sasuke had to practically spell it out for Naruto. Update!
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, very nicely done! Can't wait for the update!
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(squeals!) hmm too cute! please update soon!
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more, more, more! pleeeeaaassssssssseee!!!!!!!!!
more!!!!!!!!!
this is so hot!
great story line going!
i love this!
more!!!!!!!!!
this is so hot!
great story line going!
i love this!
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far!! I love Naruto's command of wind chakra too. I can see him being able to do this in the manga. ;)
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah!! Did not see that coming?! Hurry with the next chapter!!!