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for When He Comes

by GoldenSensei

schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hooah!!! yes! go on please I want to see more of this story! PA.
person Cat-san Uzumaki
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOOO! Write more! It's really good.
person VRon8899
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! YAY!! -dances- so excited I really love where this is going!! I can't wait for more!!!!
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far!
person uchiha-fluffer
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! Diggin on this fic. I always like to see Izumo and Kotetsu... the little side scene is a nice touch. Apart from that, it's a good start, and I'd like to read more.
person Akiru chan
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I am so glad you continued this. It really is great.

I loved the Texas beef comment. Yes we really do have the best beef. LOL. Gotta love texas.

anywho update soon.
person Akiru chan
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. please do continue.
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Hell yeah! continue please! Please! I'll give you strawberry flavored pockey! PA.
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
there has got to be more!!!!!!!! *squeals*
person hentai girl
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love chap 1 so far, keep it up