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for When He Comes

by GoldenSensei

person Joycelyn
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! Cant wait for the next Chap! ^_^
person Cianis
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh what happens next?!
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh if thou woulds't please!!!!!!!!!

please continue this - you have a very promising start!
person dana
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was an ok begining you have a good start gooimg so far. if you continue will you make this a mpreg story. i hope that you continue.
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting beginning. Yeh go forward! And your first one? Wow!!!
person Astyra
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really looking for to your continued story line!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its good so far so whats next.
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was interesting. Hurry with the next chapter!!
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It had better be TBC!
person Kim
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why would you have a question mark next to TBC ? It is quite clearly excellent and needs to be continued. There's not question in it. :D

I look forwards to the extension of this story. :D