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for Be a Good Boy, un!

by FlamingRyoko

person DarkSide
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.o that is one evil cliff-hanger.
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for an update!
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Moar!! Need Moar!! Like now!!
person Trippy
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I just the date on which this is posted!! I hope you update soon, I love this story!! Tobi is such a sweetie, Deidara should be happy Tobi brought him!!
Please update soon!! <3 <3 <3
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty good. hope you update ^_^ i want to know what happens next :)
person kai
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how dare you leave it right there. bad, cliffhanger, bad!! XDD
I'm really enjoying this so far, update soon!!

KAI
person Me.
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw! There are never good stories like this that are finished... please update the story! I want to see what happens next!
person Sky
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. I hope to read more!
person Sikal
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
way cool keep this up! I like the idea of Tobi having a scarred face under his mask cause it adds to the mystery of his background story :)
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
stupid cliff hangers, always get worked up over nothing