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for Be a Good Boy, un!

by FlamingRyoko

person Shinigami24
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really want to see what's under that mask! By the way, what's with the orange mask? *muses* WHY do I get the feeling that Tobi and Naruto would get along like a house on fire? IF they ever met? They have the same hideous taste...I don't think orange and red go together, even if black goes with everything...
person Sammich 8D
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Adorable fic so far! Love it!
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was soooo incredibly cute. I love it a lot, and I really, really hope that your procrastination doesn't make the next chapter too long in coming. ^^
person Ashley
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey babe. I, myself, haven't read much yaoi nor do I know much about Akatsuki for neglecting Naruto for so long -- but I have to say, I really like this. It seems a little out of character but I guess that's why it's a fanfiction. I think it's really cute how you made Tobi the uber-hyperness. I always got this image from people that Deidara would act really girly, but I honestly don't know. You've made him pretty masculine so far. I can't wait to read your next chapter.
person DF
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Simply awesome. I love your writing style and can't wait until you continue! Great work!
person Hello
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like, update soon please!
person Anon
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the potential this story has, un. I can't wait for you to put more up, un. I'm not sure what to think of Tobi, and his stupid mask, un. But I like how you portray him, un. Update soon, un. Thanks