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for Three's Company

by desolatebutterfly

schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
waaaaha *runs around in circles, exitedly*
That was great! And HOT!
*runs around some more*

Please update soon. Pretty please.
person Tleilaxu
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMN YOU! How dare you leave us hanging like that! JUST KIDDING LOL that was an excellent plan. Keep it up this is awesome.
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I must say, I absolutely despise the SasuSaku pairing (no offense to you), but this story is probably one of the more realistic (well, excluding the whole Sasuke marrying Sakura part) stories about them that I've read. Well written, characterization is good, it's funny (lose your virginity to a cucumber, hilarious!) and I just love how you threw Naruto in there at the end of chapter two. Actually, I only decided to read this story because it has NaruSakuSasu in it (I love team 7 smut) and was curious how you would arrange it. Now that I'm finished, I'm glad that I didn't let the SasuSaku warning turn me away from it because it's shaping up to be a really good story.

Looking forward to the next chapter and some yummy NaruSakuSasu sex. Perhaps even a little bit of yaoi? You know, as Sasuke's punishment for always leaving Sakura high and turned on.

Ja ne
~Sin
person Selow
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh
the anticipation has mutilated my brain. after 5 minutes D:
it is an intriguing story! it is the smut-cliffhanger of the month!
i also like their characterizations a lot, as per usual in these fics of yours (on which i have not commented thus far, um). the virgin-sasuke is too cute... in a neurotic sort of way...
person RacerX78
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
COol chapter, like I said before I'm no fan of Sasu/Saku but I'm interested in what Naruto as a role in this. Don't forget our hero(Naruto) alright get him a nice woman let's see temari, Ino, anko, kurenai, no hinata too many of these stories. Well don't leave Naruto behind
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am really impressed. I liked the interactions between all the characters. Sasuke's inability to perform is somehow chivalrous and endearingly inept. But I love that Naruto can instantly equate it to his being a virgin! I like that Sakura is turned on by being watched and very conscientious of everyone's relationships. I can't wait to see where this is going and how this night will impact their relationships. You are doing a very good job and I will look forward to the next chapter.
person Kilrath
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nicely written, i like the little surprise saske got at the end of the second chapter. Keep this up
person Kyuubi-Kun
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha really awesome so far
keep up the good work
i want to see what naruto does to sauske
UPDATE SOON
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you update soon becasue it would be just plain evil to leave us hanging like that for long. I'm really liking this fic so far and I want to see the role Naruto ends up playing between the two of them. Although I've liked Saku/Sasu fics before this, I really like how you portray him as being so hesitant towards intimacy. Please continue this soon!
person Jin
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn. Sasuke's going to be pissed about this. Update soon!