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for Slave no Jutsu

by Animefanatic31

schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I also forgot to add that I want a fluffy ending. The poor boy needs some love.
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, could you e-mail me at dragonfire117@comcast.net? I would like to talk to you about your fic.
person anon
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i would suggest adding hinata or tenten to the slave harem
person PlatiumDragon
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad story, Like it alot keep up the good work :D
person dude
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hinata not a virgen WTF shes the most innocent and sakura is the virgen i think u passed up a good scene
person sajuuk21
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hello !!!
please write speedly the next chapter
an make temari tenten anko and kurenai like slave please (hinata or hanabi or the both)
a +
sajuuk
person Adam
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really enjoy this so far, but I have a little request. You see, I was hoping you could have Naruto use Shadow Clone Jutsu on Sakura and Ino at the same time taking them in all holes. Another would be if you could have Hinata join them, either willingly or thru the Slave Jutsu. Thanks and great job.
person blackshadow
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
make them all stay with naruto no revenge naruto deserves his girls
person writer33
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
make the girls pay.
this is how get them pregnant then remove the jutsu.
person red
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh, I really like the MC vibe you have going here. I say, let Naruto build his harem...and then have it stripped from him by someone else...maybe catch Naruto with the Slave Jutsu while he is in female form...MWAHAHAHA! I'd love to see more of this.