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Yes, Naruto deserves to be happy, and I'm a sick perv, so they shouldn't get their revenge.

Also, it's a damn shame he won't use it on Tsunade. That'd be HOT.

Wow this is an amazing story, I look forward to many more chapters

Boy, oh boy, this is a good story. Unlike some stories this actually has a plot and a good one at that, although I do think Sakura's brest should be bigger (maybe a size D?) and maybe have Naruto pay a little more attention to her chest area *wink, wink*. But, overall this is a good story and I can't wait to see how it unfolds. Oh...um, maybe you can throw in a Female Haku somehow?

please update soon this is a great story

The girls should absolutely get revenge--this is rape, plain and simple. You could argue it's worse for Sakura because she trusted Naruto and he's forcing her to do things, or for Ino because he's humiliating her with his rules.

If you want a fluffy ending, let it be kyuubi's fault. The girls can get revenge on him by, oh, locking him away (or whatever--it's just a suggestion) and then Naruto would be in the clear for a happy ending.

;D I love this story. I really hope you put in a fluffy ending...but maybe the girls getting revenge wouldn't be that bad...

"-I’ll try to put more detail into the lemons *hides blush* I am a fan of spanking *hehe* so forgive any excessiveness in that regards"
YAY! That is awesome, I hope to god you put more. <3 Gah. I'm such a perv. But this story's great, so pleeeease put up new chapters soon.

Nice story, I like the way you describe Naruto's fall into the "Dark side". As you requested suggestion, i would like to see a fluffy ending ( read "fluffy" as "Naruto keeps the girls he jutso'ed happy and with him); As for other girls, Temari is the first I could think of (she's hot, she's older, she's NOT for Shikamaru! I'm not the only one to think it in th reviews, so please give her to Naruto!), and the only other I really like to see.

Now for the plot part, i'm ok with DarkLordOfKichiku's review, and I think Temari could like to live with Naruto, at least for everything he did for her family (saved 2 times Gaara anyone?); Sakura and Ino could be in not only for competition, but also because They understand that Naruto could be 10 times a better lover than Emo-Sasuke! (sorry Sasukefans, but this is for this fic wellbeing^^)

I hope Naruto stays happy with his life he's earnd it

In Japanase folklore, kitsunes are renowned like old, wise, powerful beings, but also like tricksters and seductress/temptress (usually the tales feature a female fox seducting a male human, and even bearing his babies). However much he's an upper demon, it's evident Kyuubi is STILL a nine-tailed fox. Since Naruto IS already a trickster, I guess it's only logical he develops another fox-like trait.

I quite like your story so far. It's well narrated and well written, even if there're some typos here and there. Regarding the end... so long as Naruto and Sakura end up together, I don't care much for the details. I guess a fluffy, happy end would be nice, since Naruto has led a crappy life and he deserves something good. Then again, his actions are grave and they can't be simply disregarded. Perhaps you can emphatize the fact the demon-fox is controlling him, just like he's controlling the girls?

And I've just thought of something: everybody knows Sakura has a split-personality. After all, Inner Sakura protected Sakura from Ino's mind-control's jutsu. What if Inner Sakura can protect her mind from the Slave no Jutsu... but she is choosing NOT doing it? Maybe she doesn't want battling it because so she can have unbridled sex with Naruto, with no inihibitions or concerns, instead of mourning for a guy never loved her, betrayed her and their friends and left her several years ago. And the Slave no Jutsy gives her the chance to move on without feeling she's betraying her feelings for Sasuke.

I think it can be a cool idea if you want using it. Then again, it's your story. Do what you feel it's best. :)