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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool! This is amazing. Finally, there will be a Kage Bunshin gangbang! And one more thing, please, do not put Kakashi/Sakura here. It scares me. Even though it looks hot, it still scares me.
Anyway, please continue!
Anyway, please continue!
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaa... Kage bushin action!!! lol, I like sakura best
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good story! I like the fact that Naruto finally gets to be happy with Sakura. (I never could stand her obsession with Sasuke) I also think that you could write a Kakashi/Sakura fic using the justsu ( I just love Kakashi/Sakura) Naruto/Sakura is my second favorite pairing. Please update soon.
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yo.
Very hot story youve got running here. The thought of being able to sleep with all the women of your fantasy without any consequences is appealing... yet the utopian dilussion should hit a wall sometime. By what you've said most of the reviews want a *excuse my bluntness* corny fluff ending. I guess I'm the only one who wants angst. Build up the passion, the lust, but Naruto should eventually have to pay for his pleasure. He raped them after all. Its as simple as that. Some small part of them might have enjoyed it or even wanted to fuck him, but he still took the decision out of their hands. He needs to face the shit. Hope he does. But I figure you'll go with the crowd. I'll still read, if only until the conclusion starts appearing.
Till next time... adios.
Very hot story youve got running here. The thought of being able to sleep with all the women of your fantasy without any consequences is appealing... yet the utopian dilussion should hit a wall sometime. By what you've said most of the reviews want a *excuse my bluntness* corny fluff ending. I guess I'm the only one who wants angst. Build up the passion, the lust, but Naruto should eventually have to pay for his pleasure. He raped them after all. Its as simple as that. Some small part of them might have enjoyed it or even wanted to fuck him, but he still took the decision out of their hands. He needs to face the shit. Hope he does. But I figure you'll go with the crowd. I'll still read, if only until the conclusion starts appearing.
Till next time... adios.
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think that hana should be one of his girls,or his bitch,and he rides her doggy stlye,and maybe anko as his whore,and mayb he should make his woman lesbians to
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap this is hot! I can't wait to see what else is in store for us. Spanking, eh? *giggles perversly*
Still hoping for a fliffy ending. So far I don't see the girls needing revenge. He's doing a good job...taking care of them. Update soon!
Still hoping for a fliffy ending. So far I don't see the girls needing revenge. He's doing a good job...taking care of them. Update soon!
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm How about the girls get free of the jutsu but they finally find out that Kyuubi was the one that forced Naruto to do it... or something like that. Yes I think Naruto needs his "cherry blossom".
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hinata should get a piece of this action!! She has loved Naruto for years. And Naruto wouldn't even NEED to use the Slave No Jutsu on her!
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh I'm a fan of spanking also, well if I'm doing the spanking XD.
Anyways nice turn out of the threesome, but I still hope it ends up being a harem. But if you're going to choose I say threesome of SakuNaruIno being together in the end. Ino needs some happiness and she seems to be getting it from Naruto so that's fine.
I hope no Hinata. but your story.
Well update soon.
Anyways nice turn out of the threesome, but I still hope it ends up being a harem. But if you're going to choose I say threesome of SakuNaruIno being together in the end. Ino needs some happiness and she seems to be getting it from Naruto so that's fine.
I hope no Hinata. but your story.
Well update soon.
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I seriously love your story. Please keep up the great work. I hope your next work with have a certain pearl eyed Hyuuga heir. If any one beside Naruto deserves love it's Hinata and heaven knows what closet perverted ideas pop into her head (she turns red as a tomato just looking at Naruto.) I hope the next one has Naruto, Sakura and a Slave No Jutsu confidence boosted Hinata in it (you can even put some spanking in it.) And I love the idea of a happy ending for our favorite fox boy but maybe with all the girls having fun out of it too. Well like before please in the name of Naruto keep up the great work.